Reviews for Good Genes
kiara jasmine chapter 7 . 2/23/2022
Halo Author, My name is Kiara I’m a scout talent from a fast-growing platform. Nowadays werewolf story is in trend and I think your story has the potential to gain more readers on our platform! May I know how to reach you professionally?
amja7578 chapter 7 . 11/21/2014
OMG! You can't be serious! How can you leave us, readers, like this? Cliff-hanger much?

Come one, please, go on writing, I promise cookies! :-)

If you're out of ideas, here you have some:
- both vamp and wolf seem to have same mate so huge conflict ensues (even war?)
- girl is utterly confused because actually attracted to both and going crazy because dreams with vamp guy keep happening
- bethany mad and awfully jealous and wants girl out of the picture so she can have alpha for herself and willing to plot with vamps to have her taken away
- Alexander secret crush on girl
- vamp and wolf confused because how can they have the same mate? Makes no sense
- Bethany's plot fails and wolf finds out and gets girl back and Bethany's punished
- girl dragged back and forth and feeling at a loss
- vamp feels drawn to girl but deep down something not quite right. He tastes her blood and damn alluring but not 100% perfect
- girl manages to run away and finds out she has a (twin) sister, who turns out to be vamp's mate
- vamp and wolf still fighting but sisters stop them and end war and it all good
adrianafm chapter 7 . 10/17/2014
OMG! You can't be serious! How can you leave us, readers, like this? Cliff-hanger much?

Come one, please, go on writing, I promise cookies! :-)

If you're out of ideas, here you have some:
- both vamp and wolf seem to have same mate so huge conflict ensues (even war?)
- girl is utterly confused because actually attracted to both and going crazy because dreams with vamp guy keep happening
- bethany mad and awfully jealous and wants girl out of the picture so she can have alpha for herself and willing to plot with vamps to have her taken away
- Alexander secret crush on girl
- vamp and wolf confused because how can they have the same mate? Makes no sense
- Bethany's plot fails and wolf finds out and gets girl back and Bethany's punished
- girl dragged back and forth and feeling at a loss
- vamp feels drawn to girl but deep down something not quite right. He tastes her blood and damn alluring but not 100% perfect
- girl manages to run away and finds out she has a (twin) sister, who turns out to be vamp's mate
- vamp and wolf still fighting but sisters stop them and end war and it all good
Shadow2016 chapter 7 . 9/12/2013
Drama between xzavier and kyle while things between alexander and kimberly heat up would be fun to read. So much drama could be caused
hotchocolate159 chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
:D
princessbloom29 chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
awesome
Luna Sylv chapter 6 . 8/19/2013
i think you should it would piss off Kyle and I think Kimberly would want that. But's it's really good except for a few spelling mistakes!
StarGazerkawaii chapter 6 . 8/18/2013
No, find Alexander a pretty girl of ts own.
hotchocolate159 chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
Love it
hotchocolate159 chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
great :D
Marie Ya'el chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Love it hope u update soon.