Reviews for Good Genes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Halo Author, My name is Kiara I’m a scout talent from a fast-growing platform. Nowadays werewolf story is in trend and I think your story has the potential to gain more readers on our platform! May I know how to reach you professionally? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! You can't be serious! How can you leave us, readers, like this? Cliff-hanger much? Come one, please, go on writing, I promise cookies! :-) If you're out of ideas, here you have some: - both vamp and wolf seem to have same mate so huge conflict ensues (even war?) - girl is utterly confused because actually attracted to both and going crazy because dreams with vamp guy keep happening - bethany mad and awfully jealous and wants girl out of the picture so she can have alpha for herself and willing to plot with vamps to have her taken away - Alexander secret crush on girl - vamp and wolf confused because how can they have the same mate? Makes no sense - Bethany's plot fails and wolf finds out and gets girl back and Bethany's punished - girl dragged back and forth and feeling at a loss - vamp feels drawn to girl but deep down something not quite right. He tastes her blood and damn alluring but not 100% perfect - girl manages to run away and finds out she has a (twin) sister, who turns out to be vamp's mate - vamp and wolf still fighting but sisters stop them and end war and it all good |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! You can't be serious! How can you leave us, readers, like this? Cliff-hanger much? Come one, please, go on writing, I promise cookies! :-) If you're out of ideas, here you have some: - both vamp and wolf seem to have same mate so huge conflict ensues (even war?) - girl is utterly confused because actually attracted to both and going crazy because dreams with vamp guy keep happening - bethany mad and awfully jealous and wants girl out of the picture so she can have alpha for herself and willing to plot with vamps to have her taken away - Alexander secret crush on girl - vamp and wolf confused because how can they have the same mate? Makes no sense - Bethany's plot fails and wolf finds out and gets girl back and Bethany's punished - girl dragged back and forth and feeling at a loss - vamp feels drawn to girl but deep down something not quite right. He tastes her blood and damn alluring but not 100% perfect - girl manages to run away and finds out she has a (twin) sister, who turns out to be vamp's mate - vamp and wolf still fighting but sisters stop them and end war and it all good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drama between xzavier and kyle while things between alexander and kimberly heat up would be fun to read. So much drama could be caused |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think you should it would piss off Kyle and I think Kimberly would want that. But's it's really good except for a few spelling mistakes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, find Alexander a pretty girl of ts own. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() great :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it hope u update soon. |