Reviews for Beneath Her Ivory Skin
Ms. Poe chapter 12 . 3/12
Your poetry is wonderful. I love how it's sad, emotional, and raw - relatable, for me and I'm sure many others - and then there are the littlest glimpses of hope here and there. Very beautiful.
MethodlessMadness chapter 12 . 2/21
Been there, done that.
*gives big tight hug again*
MethodlessMadness chapter 11 . 1/29
I know a song titled Nothing Left To Say...it's by Imagine Dragons.
Ahh, I love Imagine Dragons.
Are you annoyed with me yet?
MethodlessMadness chapter 9 . 1/22
Here. You can have all my Necco wafers.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (*roll of Necco wafers)
Uh...except for the ones I ate already. Those I don't think you want.
MethodlessMadness chapter 8 . 1/22
Hehe...even I don't know.
Or maybe I do.
Or maybe I'm just to scare to look.
MethodlessMadness chapter 5 . 1/22
Touché again.
MethodlessMadness chapter 4 . 1/22
*sends virtual hug*
MethodlessMadness chapter 3 . 1/22
Touché.
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 1/22
Can I give you a hug? Or a Necco wafer? Here, I've got a whole roll of them.
*sends imaginary Necco wafer to you*
O
Veronica Fay chapter 8 . 12/28/2013
Hi! I really enjoyed these! My favorite was Spring Crying and She is Silent, and I really loved When the Facade Falls :)

-Veronica
Ally-Ann chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
These poems are beautiful, truthful, sad, and beautiful all over again. Sometimes it's hard to tell what a person is like through there poetry since so much of it sounds very generic and average. Your poetry, on the other hand, is like a breath of fresh air, not so much because of the subject matter, but because of the syntax; it's lovely and flows very smoothly. The only advice I have to give is to maybe add some punctuation to make it even stronger, but then this is your poetry and not mine. No matter what, it's gorgeous.

Thank you for this treat. :)
SkullszEyes chapter 5 . 10/3/2013
It seems you get stronger with each chapter. :)
Very inspiring.
SkullszEyes chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
I pictured a black pawn on a lonely chess board. :\
I liked this too.
SkullszEyes chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
You write the truth, which is again - awesome!
:)
SkullszEyes chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
*0* This is awesome too.
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