Reviews for Fifteen And Life To Go
Harmony'sLoveHP chapter 6 . 7/22/2014
All in all, it has been a good story. There are several mistakes throughout it that could be corrected with a proofreader, but it is a good story and I believe that after a few revisions then it could be a great story. I hope you consider finishing this and give it the dedication it deserves.
Harmony'sLoveHP chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
Nice xhapter. It's jind of a sadder one, but good as always!
Harmony'sLoveHP chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
Loved it! My favorite part was probably the last paragraph. I find it ironic that he finds his true place amongst a group of criminals.
Harmony'sLoveHP chapter 3 . 7/17/2014
Nice chapter as always. I love how Nate has so much trouble fishing. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Harmony'sLoveHP chapter 2 . 5/25/2014
Even though they are both criminals, they have a really cute relationship. Nice chapter :)
Harmony'sLoveHP chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Nice start to the story. It's a long chapter, but it was sweet-if that's the right word. I enjoy both of their personalities and I like how easily the story flows from one thing to another. Good chapter and I can't wait to read more. :)