Reviews for Loneliness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really touching! Perfect length and style. 10/10. Keep it up! Starre |
![]() ![]() ![]() simple, but solid. i liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() So that's why empty houses always look so terribly sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this short piece. Especially how you personified the house when there were actual humans living in it, as if their presence gave the building a soul. Definitely something that can be built upon (Say, an introduction to a derelict building or something of the sort), but it's left off at just a nice point that the reader can be satisfied. Nicely done. |