|Reviews for A Poem for Two Voices|
| Vivechka chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
This is a really interesting poem and I love the way that the tension builds as you picture the two people shouting and spitting at each other. I can picture this as a physical theatre piece, it seems really designed for the stage and it's a shame that it's confined to a two dimensional page as it would be so good to have people acting out the lines.
| Noone35 chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
And this is the time where I just nod my head and say that I understood the meaning of whatever was behind this group of words...
But, since you're not allowing me to ramble as I always do, I must say that I cannot quite picture what you wanted to say here. I'm sure that, if I looked hard enough (or thought hard enough), I could find a few of the meanings, but...
I'm tired... and without coffee-music, so I'm a bit rusty on trying to find meanings in things.
But, anyway. Good job. There is some meaning that I picked up, but I could be wrong, so I'll keep it to myself.
Maybe I'll make a poem or something... (Unless that was part of the deal, anyway. The part that I can't truly remember.) And, if a poem was part of the deal on my side, I am sorry. There are too many excuses I can give you about the reasons I haven't been on, but I don't want to waste your time by giving you one. So, I'll just say I'm a bad person. I killed someone and it took me nearly a month to get rid of the body.
I was joking...
:D Have a nice day!