|Reviews for Alien Sunset|
| Felrain chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Lawl, can't we all.
| D. M. Robb chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
I love your descriptions of this alien world. I'd love to visit it too! I only have a few minor nitpicks concerning the dialog. For example, you have: "Aren't you coming to bed?" He asks in his deep and rich voice. The "H" of "He" should be lowercase: "Aren't you coming to bed?" he asks in his deep and rich voice. You did this in a few places.
Overall, this is a lovely vignette. Thanks for sharing!