|Reviews for Rules to Die By|
| Joy West chapter 24 . 6/24/2016
OMGGGGGG! it is over. I can't believe this. Flawlessly written,captivating emotions. I don't think I can describe how I felt reading this book.I can't wait to read bbok 2 and I am praying it is complete. This book can compete with divergent and beat it hands down. I could not help but be moved by her conflicting desires. Even though I found this book by chance, I am so happy I did not skip it. Thank heavens you did not take it down.
| my princess ending chapter 24 . 5/29/2016
Veronica, how wonderful! I love this story so much. I love the characters in this story and their personality and how they react to things. I love this universe you have created. But I especially love how you write. I love that it's vague so the reader can guess and assume but then you confirm it later. Just like with Elizabeth's plan, we weren't sure what she was going to do but it made it sound like she will follow her master until the end, but she didn't. I love that it lets us peek into weaknesses and strengths and what it looks like to be on the brainwashed side. I'm so happy I found this story because it truly is wonderful. Thank you.
| my princess ending chapter 13 . 5/28/2016
I love how strong Elizabeth is but at the same time she is so weak. I suppose she's growing stronger with the correct feelings. She's realizing that her master isn't the man she thinks he is but at the same time she keeps to some of the rules she learned from him. My heart aches to see her pretending to be who she was supposed to be. It makes me happy to see that she can be so happy but I know it's not a good idea. If she plans to return to her master, she can't act that way! I hope everything goes well.
| my princess ending chapter 10 . 5/27/2016
My theory is that Mikey is also gifted and he has the gift of protecting a place, kind of like a barrier. Jared is really suspicious and I want to know what's his deal. But I like him because he's smart and thinks fast. He knows how to react and what to do to get things going in his favor. Elizabeth should take notes.
| my princess ending chapter 7 . 5/27/2016
It kills me to see that Elizabeth is weak now. Not that there's a problem with her feeling things but I just hate that she's letting her emotions get to her. She won't kill that soldier and she hesitated, I feel like she's so different. I just don't want to see her get hurt because of her bad decisions.
| my princess ending chapter 5 . 5/27/2016
I love this universe you have created. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story because this is kind of what I've been looking for, for a while now! I love Elizabeth's character because she tries her hardest and she isn't weak, or at least she tries not to be. I love that she detests weak people and I love that she isn't easily manipulated. I hope John doesn't die because he is a good man!
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/25/2015
Truly an interesting read. I have read books similar to this, but it's still got its unique spin to it. Well done! :)
| Aria Fray chapter 24 . 6/9/2015
I don't normally write reviews, but after finishing this book in one sitting I think it deserves a review. This book was fantastic, the character of Elizabeth was so three dimensional and human that even when I thought I understood her she would surprise me. I really enjoy the way the site didn't hold you hand, it just nudged you in the right direction without spelling everything out for you. Thanks for a great read!
| PinzAndNeedles chapter 23 . 4/9/2015
I just reread this story for the second and honestly speaking, I love iy even more this time around. You really did a great job and you're a great writer :) definitely one of my favourite stories
| SH chapter 7 . 4/6/2015
But how was the oatmeal?
| Bahati chapter 24 . 3/30/2015
Honestly, this is the best story I've ever read on fictionpress. wow
| Kayla159 chapter 24 . 2/23/2015
One of the very few stories I enjoyed so much. It is so well written. The plot is so well thought out and planned, I really like that the smallest details have such strong meaning and relevance, in the way that future chapters refer back to those details, that end up being crucial to the plot development. The characters are so well described and their development felt real and not rushed.
So happy that there is sequel. Definitely buying the paperback book so I can re-read it in the future.
| xoxokristen chapter 24 . 2/10/2015
Excellent story! One of the best that I've read in long time!
| kiwi.boba chapter 25 . 2/9/2015
I am sooooo glad I got the chance to read this story before you take it down. It was so good, I put it in my wish list on amazon until Friday when I get paid, so I can buy myself a copy.
I love this story, I love the characters. I love the way you wrote it. Looking forward to all of your updates for the sequel!
| renegade01 chapter 25 . 10/25/2014
I seriously can't get over just how good this is! Truly one of the best I've read here. Your characters are amazing, I'm glad there's a sequel and maybe there's hope for Adrian ;-) I loved all the action and her gift is amazing and sounds like it's about to get even better. You may want to bump this up to a M rating especially with Lizzie's torture scene. Loved all of it and you made me cry towards the end! ;-)