You seem to have a thing for best-friend relationships... but I was totally going for the gamer guy boredandapathetic or the boss one, I think this story could have been a lot better with this idea!

Like he's trying to find out who these people are in real life and is caught between two choices his best friend or a mysterious guy I'm getting fan girl chills from the idea! XD

After reading your other fictions, I really believe you could do a better job with this one you already have a killer set up and awesome characters with funny quirks!

Thanks for the read and for god's sake update something soon! ;)

-RPS

I really loved the story and I thought the picture to go with it was a cute touch