|Reviews for Eloquently
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
beautiful just beautiful
| Nicole chapter 1 . 3/27/2020
I recognised the story from the title alone, it felt like it wasn't long ago that I first read this. Time flies, the world around me has changed, I've lost many fragments of myself over the years... but I'm still a sappy, hopeless romantic who doesn't attract anything of the sort in reality, and seeks out that fulfilment through stories. I don't know if I'll ever meet a boy who will love me for who I am, heck, I have trouble even finding someone who is willing to make mutual compromises for the sake of friendship. Life has led me to some strange place where I can't seem to find common ground with those around me, and I can't wait to get out of here. In the meantime, I am content with living vicariously through stories like yours.
| Jorja chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
Wow, this is so outstanding.
| DiAnna44 chapter 1 . 10/11/2018
sighs so I'm not sure if you're even looking comments for this story anymore, but I just came across this work on ao3 for the bts fandom. and you got plagiarized unless they asked for permission. it's called "one word at a time" by scribbler1221 for Kim Namjoon/Min Yoongi and yeah. just thought you should know!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
Wow. That was soooo good. I can totally relate on how her heart aches in envy for the protagonists in books. And right now my heart does the same after reading your story. Great great job.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
They are beautiful words.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
BE STILL MY HEART.
So there's a feels meter, right? There's "ugh", "meh", and "fabulous."
Your story just BROKE MY FEELS METER!
Just let that speak for itself. :D
| brooktroutlittleriver chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
This was very beautiful. Thank you for writing this. Is it possible you could post the poem? I would love to read it!
| Nicole chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
Your writing I'm having trouble holding in emotions as I consume it all in this public area, in the best way possible. Words are really brilliant, ironically indescribable at times. Thank you for creating this piece of work for us to indulge in. Perhaps one day I may find it in myself to structure my thoughts into substance, and put together a story - something I haven't been able to accomplish for the longest time. Until then, and even then, I would like to express my gratitude for giving me at least a little tinge of inspiration. I do wish you the best in whatever endeavours you may have, keep up the good work!
P.S. Nice name.
| Mr. Ree chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
Funnily enough, the reason I clicked on this stostory's that I fell in love with your words. When I read her quote in the summary I thought "that's beautiful I have to read this" and it beautiful it was. Not beautiful, actually. Eloquent. I had that word in my head long before I saw you first write it, and its one of my favorite words, not only the way it sounds but it's entire aura. I love that you have such a deep appreciation for words, and I love that you were able to write a love story that was between you and your words as much as it was between your characters. Truly, very enjoyable on so many levels.
| bpagayon chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I love it.
| Pippin Pendragon chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
I adore this. This is probably my favoritecshort story I've read on this site.
| Eia raizen chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
This was amazing!
I actually cried after reading this...
Can't believe the protagonist is so similar to me...
| Bahati chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
wow this is so beautiful, I'm in tears
| MysteriousNerdness-07 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
HOLY CRAP HANDS DOWN THIS IS BEST FIC I HAVE READ. MEIN GOTT... *squeals*
*flops* Why can't I get into a relationship this way?...