Reviews for Birds of a Feather |
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![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so I LOVE this story as well as What She Saw and the sequel and was wondering if you are going to finish them. I'm dying to what happens in them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. Me again. I was wondering what time period this is set in. I mean, this is obviously an old timey village with racist parts and everything, but I don't think even the small towns in America act like this in modern times...but hey, what do I know? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love the dynamics of Break and Oliver's relationship. Also, I like how you're making David's family business obvious, but at the same time, it's like you can't put you finger on what his family business is...well, maybe that's just me. What I find troubling is, you keep switching POVs. Maybe, make their point of views longer, and not change frequently, because it's like two different plots right now since it's just the beginning of your story and I should keep reading, and...never mind. It was just a suggestion :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story, cant wait for the update |
![]() ![]() Best story on this website. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reminds me of Divergent: Markus, the gun turned on her family, the birds...anyone else agree? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... this is incredible! I loved the build-up of the characters and your writing technique is outstanding. I can't wait to read the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Keep it up! I'm sucked in :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I READ THIS STORY! I love this story. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() His father is a terrible person, and why does he go to church if it is all a show to make people think he is a good person. Could you please put something to tell us that you're going to change perspective, it is really confusing. Sorry if I offended you please don't be mad. This is a really good story so far. :D |