Yay! You updated it! Happiness! :D
I LOVE ZACK AND LUKA SO MUCH! 3 they're so cute :P
Ritsu and Ryan are adorable too :D
I hope you update soon because I want to know what happens next. :D

wow... every line in my review ends with a happy face. That means the story must be good beacuse I put 5 happy faces in my review. :{D

I really like your story so far, please update as soon as you can.

I love this story SO SO SO SO MUCH! The reason I didn't comment in any of the previous chapters was because I couldn't stop reading! PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to figure out what happens! :D

Aaaaand let the race begin! :D And indeed, a hint about the after-kidnapping. I don't know quite what to think of it yet, seeing as right know, the elders are still a mystery. Nice guys, bad guys, or a little bit of both?... And well, I hope Zack makes use of the ambiguity in "have access to the first born", after all it's not the same as giving one's child completely over ;) Or maybe you're going for a full fight against the elders? But let's not spoil the story and be patient
I also hope we get introduced to a few more women, like Camyron ; I often find that slash stories lack a realistic amount of them (not asking for het here, just that they be around ;) ).
Thank you for the update!

This is really good! I like how much Zack and Luka love each other, but I am sad that Luka thought about giving up so fast! Also, isn't 16 really young to get pregnant? Even if you are a boy werewolf? I can't believe poor Luka was raped, I wonder how that is going to affect him later with Zack. . . I can't believe how you ended this! Such a cliffhanger, I want to see what happens! I really like your writing :) Oh, and what was with the fairy bargain? I feel like that is not going to end well. . . bad fairies. Anyway, I hope they find Luka! Can't wait for more updates :)

Heh, glad to be following your story, it is promising after all
I was a bit worried at the beginning, because of the "condensed" formatting (which is quite tiring to read, every line squeezed to the next), but fortunately it didn't last long ;) The writing improved and got more fluent too (even if there's still a confusion between the plural -s and the possessive -'s), so I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story :D I like Luka's character a lot already - he's no whining weakling, this one is a fighter - and I hope we get to know him and the others even better in future chapters.
I was wondering if the whole story was going to be centered around the kidnapping period, or if their story will continue even after? Either is fine with me, I just want to know if I have to dread Luka being rescued and therefore taken away from us readers - which is an awful thing to wish, after all.
Which reminds me - wolf forms. I hope we get to see a lot more of them, I really love Astral already ;)