Reviews for Beauty and the Beast
Annonim chapter 17 . 11/14/2017
Aw I really like this, please continue!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 17 . 7/4/2017
I think you posted the wrong chapter...
Anon chapter 16 . 6/21/2017
Indeed the prince has a soul! Confirmed by our princess
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 16 . 6/7/2017
I loved it! Especially the part at the end there. I don't know what it was about it - maybe it was just the conflict because neither understands the other's point of view. Plus, I saw the allusion to her secret. I can't remember if we already know it or not, but I'm looking forward to rediscovering it. :)
"I wondered if he had meant the mean words he had said to me. I assumed not, if he was trying to be so nice. Or did he just pity me?"
Wow. Literally, this is a thought I have every day. When people are nice to me, how much of it is them being nice because they like me and how much of it is pity? When you're blind, there really isn't a good way to tell. I also like her thoughts about the ways people are supposed to help her - totally accurate. Keep it up! :)
mandywhitrod chapter 15 . 5/25/2017
Just discovered this story and read all the chapters to this one ... I hope the next chapter won't be too far away.
A novel twist on the story. Well done
Anon chapter 14 . 5/24/2017
Just read this story now, and it's wonderful. I'm excited to see how the story will develop, and there seems to be a lot coming up to look forward to!
Murron Cain chapter 1 . 4/2/2017
Wow, I love this story already and I have only read one chapter so far.
As a blind person myself, I like the way you wrote this, and I like the fact that she is a blind princess as well. So cool. I also like the way you wrote her character and what her life was like.
I'm deafinately going to read more of this.
SinisterSister chapter 11 . 12/18/2013
I love this story please update soon
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 8 . 11/12/2013
Amazing chapter! Hm... is she supposed to be able to feel spells like that? I can't wait to see what happens! it's kind of interesting how her magic interacts with her lack of sight.
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
leaht chapter 7 . 11/11/2013
Hi,

I really like stories in this genre, and I think you have an awesome idea here. You write Amelia very well. She never strays out of character. She is capable and intelligent despite her limitations. That's a great heroine right there. She took what she had and made the best of it, and she cares about others like her. Otherwise, she wouldn't put so much effort into the school for assistance dogs (an hour round-trip *walking* to the school?! Oh, my goodness! That's dedication right there.).

I also find the idea of the Souls to be verryyy interesting and fresh. At least, *I've* never read anything like that before. It definitely made me want to know more. I like Mai already. :)

I feel like a lot of these chapters can be combined into one because there is a lot of repetition in each one. We already know she feels like a pawn. There is no reason to repeat it in every chapter, as there are many other ways to show her disapproval, such as with her body language or dialogue with Mai.

Another reason I advocate for longer chapters is because by chapter three I was itching to move forward with the plot and get closer to meeting her future husband, which is what your summary promises.

I also suggest having her introduce herself in the very first sentence of chapter one, where she is already saying she's the blind princess. We don't find out her name until chapter four, and that is a little late. Identity is important in writing.

Anyway, those are my suggestions so far. You don't have to agree or even implement them. I am enjoying your story, and I can't wait for the plot to advance. :)

Leah
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 6 . 10/15/2013
Amazing chapters! Sorry I didn't review sooner. Well, at least she knows what she's talking about. It's kind of interesting how she can use her magic to sense things that people would usually ignore. I wonder how much the common sighted person would use the same spells. It's probably easier for them to just read facial expressions. *sour face*
Keep up the amazing work! :)
Tarah xXx
sindya chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Ok- Best first line ever. I usually hate first person since you never get an idea of the character, it seems more about the author. But this princess is a great character so far. Good foreshadowing. I want to keep reading. Good job
fairy.zodiac chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
I like how she stood up for herself by expressing her political knowledge. And how her father recognized it. But, too little too late, y'know? I love how her soul expressed the boys: "Looking at you like a piece of meat" because I know that happens a lot in real life and I could definitely picture it well.
I hope you update really, really soon.
fairy.zodiac chapter 4 . 10/14/2013
Again, great! I love how, even though she has a huge advantage by being able to temporarily see, you've made sure there's a big drain. She's not a mary-sue, which makes me squeal with delight. I also enjoy her planning skills- knowing she can't run away because blah blah blah and etc. She's a great mind. I also appreciate how she's raised to be a trophy wife, but wants to make more of herself and is secretly so bright.
fairy.zodiac chapter 3 . 10/14/2013
I love her struggle to show how capable she is. It's very realistic and an admirable quality. Also love the connection with her soul. It's a good advantage. She's a great problem solver.
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