|Reviews for Shadow Wings|
| Follow.the.Path chapter 4 . 4/19/2016
Hi, I just read your story for the first time and love it's uniqueness and the plot bUT noticed you have not updated in awhile and would love to know if you could update soon?
| whatcouldpossiblygowrong chapter 4 . 7/29/2015
Hi, just wondering if you were continuing with this story or if you've abandoned it?
Its got the makings of a great story.
| Gremlin-Rayne chapter 4 . 1/5/2015
Wow, I am so glad I found this! I really like the concept, and the style of writing has a very clear teenage voice; great job, and please update soon!
| Bookworm chapter 4 . 12/30/2014
Please please please update!
| AnonymousXXX chapter 4 . 11/10/2014
I love your story! It is very interesting and creative! I love your main character. I would really like to read more soon. I can see where I Wear T-Shirts- is coming from. I was raised from my parents that people who use bad word can't find anything smarter to say so they use bad words. I do NOT how ever want you to change your main character unless for character growth and that is up to you as the writer to see where this main character takes us. ;) I like where the story is going so far. I like reading stories that take me to another time and place. It's my way of escape. Your story definitely does this for me. I can however see this story potentially becoming rated M. but that may of course just be me. 3 your work!
Much Love, AnonymousXXX
| XAbsoluteZeroX chapter 4 . 8/17/2014
Lol, we've both been bad with updating haven't we? I'll update if you update, friend xD
Seriously though, I miss this story. There aren't any other stories with dragons...and reading mine gets kinda boring, lmao.
| TheAlabasterPhoenyx chapter 3 . 4/19/2014
It's really a shame this hasn't been updated - this is a seriously amazing story. I love the idea, and I cannot help but wonder what happens to her with the shadow dragon thing...
| Bookworm chapter 3 . 12/12/2013
I love this story and just realized I hadn't reviewed it! I want to say that the wait since October has been killing me! Granted Rome wasn't built in a day... But it can't wait for the next chapter I really like the set up of the story so far!
| R. Ficst chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
Hmm, I'm curious to see where you take this
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
Wow. I really like how the storyline is going. It was very nice to read such a long chapter. And alot HAPPENED.
But I honestly do not like bad language. I got kind of tired of all the mean name-calling. I think a good rule of thumb is: Do not say anything you would not say to your grandmother.
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| Alyss20 chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
I really really like your story so far! Please keep writing! You have a fan! :)
| XAbsoluteZeroX chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
Yo! So I noticed you started writing a story about dragons, so I figured I'd read it. And, not surprisingly I like it! I like Delaney, as well as her last name - Northday, that's pretty cool. I'm fond of her dry sense of humor, it's almost as if it's the last thing she has left to keep herself sane in this world and perhaps what makes her a little stronger than the average human.
I'd really like to help this story get popular quickly (Maybe because I want dragons to be popular? LOL) so, IF YOU WANT, I could help and Beta read it. The plot is strong so far - I daresay you don't even need the prologue - because you're doing a wonderful job of subtly slipping information in about the world anyway...so you don't need help with that. I did notice a couple of grammatical errors though, which just happens when you write something and you know in your head what it's supposed to sound like but a word might be missing, and such. Also, I commend you for writing in first person. I've tried it, and I found it EXCEEDINGLY hard. I actually had to stop Handmaiden (before it was called 'The Undying') and RESTART it because I had so much trouble with the first person perspective. You make it look easy.
That being said, there a select few points where you switch from present-tense to past-tense. Very easily fixed once spotted and not that big a deal, but it will definitely help you wrack up the reviews you deserve :)
One more thing! There is a spelling mistake in your summary, and that could unknowingly turn people off.
I was prepared for anything that came my way. Except for the mighty roar that tore from my opponent's throat as he shifted into a huge dragon. *** My name is Avora Green- raised and barely surviving as a fighter in the slums of a dragon ruled world. I don't know what made them kidnap me, really. But now that those dragons have,***** there (should be *they're)***** going to regret it.
Ah, also, in the sentence where it says 'But now that those dragons have-' Is it supposed to be 'But now that those dragons have (ME). they're going to regret it? Or just end after 'have'? I think it makes sense either way, but I think it makes MORE sense if you have the 'me' in there. Just my opinion!
Looking forward to the next chappie,
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
I am not sure what to think about the part toward the end where Delaney insults that dragon, when she KNOWS that he can hear her. What is she trying to prove? I get that she HATES dragons and all they stand for, but doing that was just plain stupid. And she had just proved by the way she helped that other girl out, that she has a brain and knows how to use it.
Now that said, I really, really want you to keep going. I was just trying to offer some constructive critisezum(I know that is not spelled correctly).
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| ScarlettL.Seakerlsd9 chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
I have to say I truely enjoy your main characters dry humor and the fact she has a pixie build but shes like seriously bad ass cause people have a serious tendancy to underestimate them its really interesting (I don't think that made sense but anyway). I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
As long as the story stays clean, I will keep following (no bad language or immorality, but violence does not bother me. Update soon, you really left us on a cliff-hanger.
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