Reviews for Fire and Ice
SamaraL chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
well, Derrick has a girlfriend, but he never told Cas about her. He is obviously into Cassie... Despite his icy exterior and otherwise mature ways, he is awfully immature in emotions department. And I feel bad for Ryan, who seems like a nice guy for Cassie to use him. Oh, well, somebody is bound to have his heart broken.
SamaraL chapter 5 . 9/14/2013
I really like that Derrick is such a tight pants guy. He has routine and standardized approach to everything. His lines he uses when he does not want to reply to Cassie - are an awesome idea! I also like how is almost a caricature of a guy who is too focused on being in control and therefore, even little ways he can be out of control shake him.
ally2214 chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
#drama update soon please
SamaraL chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
"Just being a good neighbor" the lamest excuse I ever heard. My bet is on Cassie's perseverance.
Kriss chapter 5 . 9/14/2013
Omg I'm so sorry I stopped reviewing tomboy but it got way to fluffy for me once they "did it" but this story is great too I love cassie. And you like to write a lot about guys that act like they have 0 feelings
adalyn chapter 5 . 9/14/2013
LOL. Derrick's so cute!
ally2214 chapter 5 . 9/14/2013
Ha I love it update please
EmilieSkellington chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
Derrick's annoying... But I like him :) great work!
ally2214 chapter 4 . 9/12/2013
Loved it please update soon
EmilieSkellington chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
Good neighborly acts hahha!
ally2214 chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
I love the story update soon
SamaraL chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
My favorite chapter so far. Cassies personality and motivations are becoming more clear. And Derrick seems to be keeping to his profile. It is nice to get a glimpse of his life and what interests him. When will she start acting more mature instead of doing this childish thing that does not work for him?
ally2214 chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Ha ha ha funny ending... Kinda
SamaraL chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
I certainly like Derrick and Cassie is so childish. When will the tables turn? Or maybe, it will continue being her pursuing him. We shall see.
SamaraL chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
I'm excited to see that you have started a new story. So the concept is opposites. Well, I'm sure, this girl will find a way to get him interested. Unless he is interested, but has no awareness of it himself.
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