Reviews for Fire and Ice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() well, Derrick has a girlfriend, but he never told Cas about her. He is obviously into Cassie... Despite his icy exterior and otherwise mature ways, he is awfully immature in emotions department. And I feel bad for Ryan, who seems like a nice guy for Cassie to use him. Oh, well, somebody is bound to have his heart broken. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like that Derrick is such a tight pants guy. He has routine and standardized approach to everything. His lines he uses when he does not want to reply to Cassie - are an awesome idea! I also like how is almost a caricature of a guy who is too focused on being in control and therefore, even little ways he can be out of control shake him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() #drama update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Just being a good neighbor" the lamest excuse I ever heard. My bet is on Cassie's perseverance. |
![]() ![]() Omg I'm so sorry I stopped reviewing tomboy but it got way to fluffy for me once they "did it" but this story is great too I love cassie. And you like to write a lot about guys that act like they have 0 feelings |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. Derrick's so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha I love it update please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Derrick's annoying... But I like him :) great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good neighborly acts hahha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite chapter so far. Cassies personality and motivations are becoming more clear. And Derrick seems to be keeping to his profile. It is nice to get a glimpse of his life and what interests him. When will she start acting more mature instead of doing this childish thing that does not work for him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha ha funny ending... Kinda |
![]() ![]() ![]() I certainly like Derrick and Cassie is so childish. When will the tables turn? Or maybe, it will continue being her pursuing him. We shall see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited to see that you have started a new story. So the concept is opposites. Well, I'm sure, this girl will find a way to get him interested. Unless he is interested, but has no awareness of it himself. |