Reviews for Hate is a Strong Word |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well Eric is sassy lmao sorry i havnt been reviewing.. ive been busy :( great chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you please just make Eric disappear, and make sure he never comes back ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a lot better besides some spelling, the need of COMMAS, and when you do the, "Mia and me," sometimes it would be "Mia and I," except i actually think that one was right... There was one in there that i saw, but oh well. Other than that excellent plot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's pretty good but there are quite a few errors that makes it hard to enjoy the story. There are a few typos that could probably be fixed with reading over it very carefully. In the first chapter, there was a sentence with a bunch of ands and a few commas, it looked like a run on sentence. Also remember when it's something like, "me and Annie are going to the mall," it's actually supposed to be, "Annie and me are going to the mall," there where a few other things but i think you get the point. It's nothing a little editing can't fix though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow Jake is an idiot... but great chapter :) update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutley love it! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter! Please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() Is it Eric or Sebastian? Character with two names? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is the situation with Callie? He doesn't seem to know what he wants and so he is hurting everyone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Jake liked her as a little kid? And he was the one who gave her flowers? What happened? It seems like Kyler was abusive, no matter how she chooses to deny it. His actions are not the actions of someone who just "snapped" at that moment. It is very sad about her puppy. She is definitely not having a good day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This high school seems to be a real mess. Everyone is sleeping with everyone. Everyone is cheating on everyone. And nobody seems honest, even with themselves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The opposite of love is not hate; it is indifference. Love and hate are remarkably close together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad for Mia. She is obviously a gracious person for reacting so well so quickly. It couldn't have been easy. |