Whew! I love this story! I enjoyed how hot but heartbreaking it was in the beginning and I appreciate the happy ending. I would love to see more one-shots with Mitch and Jen. I feel like their relationship has places to grow so there's definitely things you could write about. Regardless, thanks for a great short, fun story!

Love the ending too. Pretty intense! ;-)

Now I can understand his actions! Not that he didn't wronged her. But she's happy only with him so I'm glad he finally decided that they can be together!

I loved the way you made it plausible for them to be together in the end! :)

I know we can't tell our hearts who to love but...poor girl, he took advantage of her a lot!

He seemed to like her a lot with the way he acted until she gave him the ultimatum...Maybe he thought she'll come back, it was like his tamper tantrum only he was too proud to ask her for forgiveness and years past by...

I'm so curious to see how all it's going to end! From what you've showed us about their interaction I don't know if I should hope for a reunion or her finding a better man and forget about him...

I can't believe this guy! He has a girlfriend and still slept with her, took advantage of her like that! He really is something!

She deserves so much better! She might think it's only him, but, from my own experience, I can say for sure there are guys way better then he is and that will make her feel a lot better then he can!

After reading this chapter I went and read about this drug and hope she will quit because it's very damaging...In my country there are very few drug users so, when we see, at concerts, one of them is like seeing a rare specimen, we are very shocked and a little scared because we don't know how they'll react...

Losing control like that is scary, you could do so much worse than just sleeping with a guy, like ending up with STD.. ...

Pls make more soon :)

I am so glad she stood up for herself. Mitch was a train wreck and he was taking her down with him. I can't wait to see what you have in that last chapter!

Nice. Update soon!

I'm loving this quite a lot, but there's one thing bothering me.. She's supposed to be 24 years old and they're supposed to stop being friends 6 years ago when they were 14.. And 24 minus 6 is 18. Plus I don't think 14 year old teens are allowed to drive yet. So that doesn't make sense. Just wanted to point it out. :) Otherwise, I really hope they're gonna end up together, cuz I might cry if they won't! D:

Ooh yay! Amazing chapter :D I can finally understand what happened between them and why they are how they are... if that makes sense. Haha can't wait for the next update ;)

:O NO WHAT fix this pleaseeeee. although it was a good move for jen to finally realize that mitch was sorta/kinda dragging her down and although she loves him, etc she needs to force him to realize that losing her is worse than losing drugs! :) yay! one more chapterr update pleaseeeee? :)

You are such an amazing writer. I love each and every story you've posted. Your writing is real, it's fresh, funny, dark. It truly is a pleasure reading this. Thank you.

Only two chapters left! I have no idea what you'll throw at us, but I am squirming in my seat in anticipation if these first two chapters were this dramatic. I do feel bad for Nicole, but I d want Mitch and Jen to be together if for nothing else than a really hot relationship

Oh, this is hot. Why have I never read this? Maybe this was one of those times that I thought it was a good idea to save a story until it's completed and I can savor it all in one go. Anyway, this was really well written! :) I didn't even notice the present tense, but you seem to have been consistent in that. Yay, I'm glad it's a short story in that I'll be able to know the full plot soon. Haha