|Reviews for Just Paint|
| laughinggopher chapter 1 . 1/1
I'm thinking there should be a disclaimer somewhere here. The characters are from The Mortal Instruments by Cassandra Clare.
| moth chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
jessaca! this is adorable! don't you dare say that you're not good at anything because i can tell you that you are *really* good at writting. if you wanted to you'd be a great author.
this story has a great writer's voice, and a great flow. (though if you read it over and over you'll be able to perfect it) the characters are strong and believable and i really felt a sort of connection/kinship to them! x
the only thing i would say is that at the end when alec is giving advice he says some slightly conflicting things and i'm not sure i agree to it. but, you know, everyone has a different point of view. i think if you read over the last bit you'll be able to make the paint metaphor work a bit better - 'cause it's a lovely idea!
seriously, this is fab! and it works so well as a little story all on its own. i seriously think your really talented! before i read this i was reading an actual published book and honestly i think your writing here was just as good as that.
don't you put yourself down! this is fab
| Dragonsrule22 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013