|Reviews for Gone With the Solar Wind|
| xxx1000 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Wow, that was a very interesting read and love the ending, you built it up well.
Character description very well done, both physically and internally. In the beginning they were just characters and then built to the point I cared about them. I can relate to Leah's anguish to see an ocean, Arnold for wanting to return to a better time and Rice for wishing he had more in his life.
I like the style and word usage and the title is very cute. Very well done and I thank you for the enjoyable read.
Addition: Right at the second to the last paragraph "like a floodgate bursting open and unleashing a part him he'd long forgotten" I think you need an "of" between "part" and "him"