Reviews for Birthday Presents |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story. The characters really drove a wonderful tale. I'm totally reading that sequel, and I'm curious to see if there's a prequel on your profile, because some of the mentions throughout the story of "all that they had gone through that year" suggest a detailed backstory. Thank you so much for posting, I enjoyed every moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahha these ANs from the characters at the end are hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tessa's birthday present? Orion hog-tied. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write a sequel! I really love this story and I want to know what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my golly goodness. I LOVE IT! Give me more, give me more! I'm currently salivating over this chapter and my mouth is wide open in both shock, happiness, amazement and utter relief. I'm so relieved you posted, so happy it's here, so shocked and amazed as to what will happen. Oh please, oh please continue with part 2. If you don't continue I may have to find out from you through PM what happens because right now, both my heart and stomach have been left behind in the first few sentences. Again you have me hooked. Thank you so much for posting. Again I am unable to express how much I truly love it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! I hope you post it soon! |
![]() ![]() YES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really did like this ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a nice ending. But if Emron puts one crack in my ship I will put a bajillion in his neck. And spine. And face. Especially the face. I know his weaknesses. Anywayyy. I'm not going to lie-I'm not sure exactly what the question about part two is, but I am definitely interested in whatever requires interest. I have about a million interest. Is that enough? Because honestly I'm pretty excited. Thank you for writing this. Deets |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! It's here, it's here! *runs around screaming like a headless chook and then returns to computer eyes wide in anticipation and reads.* A smile is currently plastered on my face and my heart is racing with excitement. The last chapter and the epilogue have left me desperately wanting more. The ending was beautiful and made me smile wickedly, I wonder what Sasha got for Tessa's birthday :P Anyways you have concluded an absolutely brilliant story and I can't thank you enough as a reader for writing it. Well you know I think there are a lot of people who want Part 2 *wink* *wink*. There's me, there's my fellow readers/fictionpress people and the many other who have favourited and loved this story. I wish I could write like you :) Hope you have a simply lovely evening. :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I went to bed last night like a drug addict that had been denied their favourite drug (this was about 20 minutes before you pm'd me and I got an update email) and woke up this morning to a lovely little message and a freaking beautiful chapter. Let me just say that I started to read it in the morning, took it to school and then got told by my darling, *cough* evil *cough*, friends that I should save reading this for when I got home. I blatantly refused all of them until they took my phone hostage. The audacity of them. To make me choose between the two. Damn them. So here I am, finished, after waiting for what feels like eternity for my new drug, I mean chapter update (psssh did I say drug?). First things first, *gets into cheer outfit with pom poms* Go Morty, go Morty, go, go, go, Morty. *gets out and tries to look partially normal*. I'm so happy he asked to court her and that he told Sasha he was the prince, (I knew it, I felt it in my book loving bones).Here I am, on the couch squealing like a guinea pig crack. Oh my. I love their interaction, I love Sasha, I love Morty I love everyone. Sasha is developing so well and I just adore her entire character, she draws me in, makes me laugh, raise my eyebrows (because girl, you just can't ignore that chemistry between you and Morty), laugh and then grow to love her even more. Thank you so very much for the beautifully constructed chapter. Only thing left to say now is that I have joined the ranks of your adoring fans. Hope you have a lovely day and night. Can't wait for next Wednesday! :) :) Thank you again for updating. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That reveal. Had me out of action for about five minutes. Whatttttt. That was legitimately the last thing I'd expected. If expect fluffy ninjas to bust in before that. And this isn't even on that kind of path. At least, I don't think it is... (*suspicious glare*). But really. Whattttt. ... Yes...! This is awesome. Hahahaha! Happy. I was wondering what made her mother acquiesce so quickly. You know with the plan. What made the person of interest in the plan so influential? Now I have my answer. Did not think of this. Oh and that other moment, before the reveal-the most important one. That. Was. Precious. He was so precious...! It's so great to know that he can be phased. I mean, come on. That was such a polaroid moment. Gaaaaah. And Sasha's realization was great to watch. Read. Man I love these two. I am so happy right now like yessss you have made my day with this no lie. Woo! I just hope the other guy doesn't mess this up. If he does I will (want to) tear his eyes out and feed them to him. This is too precious. So thank you for the reassuring yet still slightly worrying message at the bottom of the chapter. And thank you for writing this! Yay! Deets P.S. I'm being intentionally vague on most names here because review have lots of spoilers so I try to avoid writing them when I can. Weird I know but eh. Okay now thanks. Again. Deets |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, I'm finally up to date and I'm sitting here glaring at my computer screen wondering why another chapter won't magically appear and then sporadically glancing towards my phone hoping for the ding that arrives when I get an email signifying an update. Oh lookie I got oneā¦.it was from my maths teacher. Damn. Anyways, I'm officially addicted and I love it. TEAM MONTY. *cough cough* Did you hear that? They have been such lovely chapters and I am so happy I found this story, again well done with such a beautiful story concept. I commend you on your writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this! |