Oh, that's bad. She's definitely brave, but also definitely crazy. I'm really looking forward to finding out what she thinks she knows but hasn't shared and what's really behind this whole thing. Thanks so much for the quick updates!

You're getting so speedy with the updates! I don't quite get how she figured out the location, but it's great when they are so in sync. Although their half-finished conversations where they don't discuss what they each know leaves me a little in the dark sometimes!;) Thanks for posting!

OH MY GOD. The oddest noises escaped my mouth while reading this chapter. Ugh, so much love for you.

:( Oh noooo!

One of my favorite chapters so far! I love the bits and pieces we got from the witches/Olivet and the witch fight actually seems to offer more answers than the ongoing slayings of centaurs. Thanks so much for the update.

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WHY THE HELL DON'T YOU HAVE MORE REVIEWS?! This is beyond amazing. I should have started ready it sooner but I'm so glad I waited. My god, PLEAAAASE tell me you're going to update soon. So amazing.

...SOOOOOON

-Stace or (That One Dork, Stacey)

Another great chapter!

I love Rick's voice; it really suits him. All short sentences and straight to the point. Makes his character so real. Love it.

Keep up the great work :)

Oh, and I thought we were getting closer to some major plot twists. I'm glad they discovered some hard facts, but they still have a long way to go. I'd love to see Az let loose on Olivet as well!;) Thanks for the update!

I had a lot of things crammed on me this week, so I was only able to get as far as chapter five over the past week; so here's my thoughts thus far:

This story isn't "my cup of tea", however I found myself thoroughly enjoying it. The characters introduced are always interesting in some way, despite the short period of time that some of them have to speak. Rick and Astraea have a nice amount of interplay, well written dialog, and their interactions are great for showing off their different personalities. Being that I haven't got far enough, I can't speak much for the storyline itself, but it 'feels' like it's going somewhere. As in, it seems thought out and focused, which draws readers into chapter after chapter.

From a writing standpoint I can't recall any glaring errors, grammatical or spelling wise, that disrupted my reading. The words flow smoothly, and I'm never felt that I was confused as to what was going on. A quick reread would by you would be more than sufficient in picking out and righting any mistakes, but at this time I would say that that's unimportant.

For suggestions, I have little. As said, the writing us solid and the interactions are good and there's little that's "wrong" with the story that I can see. Stylistically, I think it might be nice to remove some of the nicknames Rick gives to Astraea. It better to capitalize on them by making them less frequent, and it would remove some of the minor repetitions in the writing.

Besides that, I think you're all good. I'll read this slowly as I have free time, so I may make another review in the future.

They really make a great team, but one of my favorite parts of this chapter is the way they seem to have made some breakthroughs in their personal communication. Great roll out of the plot and again, I love the characterizations of Az and Rick. Thank you so much for the update!

Awww, more centaur's slaughtered? From the inside? Not good for our heroes. I love the interplay with Az and Rick, it really balances out the heaviness of the murder mystery plot. Thanks again for the update.

Oh man. Is it the Patriarch? What happened to him? Glad you updated!

I really really really like this story. Can't wait to read more! Please don't take too long to update. My heart won't be able to take it...

I love the line 'Hello rock, meet hard place.' Very good.

Oh this is fantastic. I love the way the characters interact. They are very realistic.