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The story was incredible, as it got way deeper than I thought. I'm really happy about the happy ending and couldn't think of a better end. I really liked how their relationship developped and it was surprising to witness such devotion.
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You, dear author, are amazing! This story is amazing! I love the plot, the characters, and even the world they were dwelling. This was beautifully written and, definitely, one of the best piece of literature I've read so far. The ending is very satisfying, but because it's so good I want MORE! I wish this was longer. I'm looking forward to your more of your works. Please write more!

Wow, this story is a-freaking-mazing. I love the plot and the characters, and it is just so well done. I really hope that I see more like this from you. Well done.

I got this on amazon and enjoyed it very much. I was surprised to see it here. I knew I recognized the cover image.

one of the best Slash story ever, thank you so much 3

Ooh, I love this dystopia! Also, great story, that was a really fun read!

What an interesting story. I've enjoyed this greatly. It's an unusual for the typical Master/Slave relationship, but then again Seven isn't a slave. You did this story well and I loved it.

What a beautifully written story. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
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This was hot. So very hot...
I loved this story. I have a thing for dystopias and you've given me enough world building in a relatively short story to make me happy. I'm a sucker for good world building :P
Sev is intriguing. He has every right to be bitter and angry at the world. Instead, he just doesn't let it affect him. He's strong in his submission to Demetrie, not just an angsting sub in need of a master to run his life for him like many other story subs with a similar past. I liked that about him.
I enjoyed the mix of plot and porn. It balanced nicely. Enough to get me hot and bothered without making me lose interest because of a lacking plot. Well done!

I LOVED YOUR STORY! You character seemed really thought out which made it extremely good. :) I loved the ending especially and will be looking at you other stories, if there are any i didn't check yet lol, because i also love your writing technique. :) :) :)

Awww this story was really sweet. At first I didn't really like the fact that Demetrie kept hurting Sev, but then he came to love him and treat him a lot better. And boy, was this story sexy! Those two together are like a heat wave, I love them :) I like how you had Demetrie give Sev a choice and the ability to be his equal, that is always very important in a relationship. Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed the trip these two took to falling in love. Hope to read more from you soon!

This is actually a pretty interesting story. A lot better than a lot of the stuff I read on fictionpress