Reviews for I'm Done
JasmineRaven chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
I thought this poem was powerful and seemed to have some strong emotions behind it. The repetition of the phrase 'I'm done" was very effective and, as a result of that, the poem flowed nicely. I liked your metaphors at the end, the ones about being 6 feet underground and hiding from the rain.

The only error I could pick up was "loosing' when it should be "losing."

Overall, brilliant poem! I really like it. I read your profile and it seems like you're going through a tough time, so stay strong ok! :) Well done!

Jaz