This is a really interesting story. Good work on coming up with a really unique idea! Your writing is really full of promise though I do have to point out one thing-the final sentence in the first paragraph of chapter one seems to be incomplete. It's like you half wrote it and then didn't put down the final words. Make sure you proof read before posting but otherwise this is really great. I can't wait to read more.

Plz update soon ... :-) love the story can't wait to read what happens next

I really like this story. I usually stay to the tvd stories but yours really caught my eye. You're an awesome writer can't wait for an update!

Eeep! Now I don't know what I'm more excited for, this or Mourge Dreams! I love this new concept of Atlantis!