Reviews for Chosen Series Book 2 - Heartbreak |
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MidnightRose3452 chapter 22 . 9/27/2014 Can't wait for the next book |
MidnightRose3452 chapter 21 . 9/26/2014 Can't wait to find out the result of this or if she even does expose him. |
MidnightRose3452 chapter 20 . 6/30/2014 Wow that was sad yet very interesting. I liked it and I hope you continue Heartbreak soon |
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 19 . 5/8/2014 Don't worry about the depressingness. Look at A Creepypasta Story, the character either ends up dead, insane, missing a kidney, physically and mentally scarred, or, having a pokémon game as a friend. I really like this story, keep up the good work. :D |
story chapter 19 . 5/8/2014 what a dysfunctional society, things need to change drastically. |
MidnightRose3452 chapter 19 . 5/8/2014 Can't wait for more |
MidnightRose3452 chapter 18 . 5/6/2014 Let me tell you right now that I am crying and I really do hate you right now. How the hell are you going to kill off almost everyone to end a story. There are better ways to ending something. I am just done with this story |
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 18 . 5/5/2014 If only Johnny had killed himself first. |
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 17 . 5/3/2014 Who died? Did Johnny commit suicide? Or, did he kill Aleisha? Dun dun dunnnn! Cliffhanger of epicness! |
MidnightRose3452 chapter 17 . 5/3/2014 Ooo two chapters in one day, that's awesome and you should now that I'm dying to know what happens now. You absolutely can't let anyone die, especially not Mia and her baby or Aleisha |
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 16 . 5/3/2014 I feel sorry for Mia, she can't drink coffee. *shudders at the thought* and her mom is really mean. |
MidnightRose3452 chapter 1 . 10/19/2013 Hmm... Not sure how I feel about Mia forgiving Tyler but good job as always. |
Supernatural101 chapter 10 . 10/9/2013 You write some really good chapters you know. Hope you keep it up! |
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 7 . 9/13/2013 You just love leaving us at cliffhangers, don't you? |
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 6 . 9/9/2013 Great story |