Reviews for Chosen Series Book 2 - Heartbreak
MidnightRose3452 chapter 22 . 9/27/2014
Can't wait for the next book
MidnightRose3452 chapter 21 . 9/26/2014
Can't wait to find out the result of this or if she even does expose him.
MidnightRose3452 chapter 20 . 6/30/2014
Wow that was sad yet very interesting. I liked it and I hope you continue Heartbreak soon
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 19 . 5/8/2014
Don't worry about the depressingness. Look at A Creepypasta Story, the character either ends up dead, insane, missing a kidney, physically and mentally scarred, or, having a pokémon game as a friend. I really like this story, keep up the good work. :D
story chapter 19 . 5/8/2014
what a dysfunctional society, things need to change drastically.
MidnightRose3452 chapter 19 . 5/8/2014
Can't wait for more
MidnightRose3452 chapter 18 . 5/6/2014
Let me tell you right now that I am crying and I really do hate you right now. How the hell are you going to kill off almost everyone to end a story. There are better ways to ending something. I am just done with this story
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 18 . 5/5/2014
If only Johnny had killed himself first.
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 17 . 5/3/2014
Who died? Did Johnny commit suicide? Or, did he kill Aleisha? Dun dun dunnnn! Cliffhanger of epicness!
MidnightRose3452 chapter 17 . 5/3/2014
Ooo two chapters in one day, that's awesome and you should now that I'm dying to know what happens now. You absolutely can't let anyone die, especially not Mia and her baby or Aleisha
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 16 . 5/3/2014
I feel sorry for Mia, she can't drink coffee. *shudders at the thought* and her mom is really mean.
MidnightRose3452 chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Hmm... Not sure how I feel about Mia forgiving Tyler but good
job as always.
Supernatural101 chapter 10 . 10/9/2013
You write some really good chapters you know. Hope you keep it up!
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 7 . 9/13/2013
You just love leaving us at cliffhangers, don't you?
Max Saturday the Dragon-Human chapter 6 . 9/9/2013
Great story