Reviews for Timeless
Bcbksbyahoo.com chapter 2 . 1/18
Really. Good.
Amali Roarka chapter 9 . 1/2
hahaahhahahaa I lost it at "the shit clung to his..." near the end. I had to reread it several times to see if I read that right xD you'd want to fix that... :P
Mercury78 chapter 1 . 1/2
Your summary is fine, sheesh. Have some confidence in your writing and yourself, GOSH GOLLY DARNIT
Beyond666Redemption chapter 4 . 12/10/2013
Ivan? I thought his name was Dimitri?
Beyond666Redemption chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
"...an iPhone from a company named after a fruit." Loved that :)
Beyond666Redemption chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Nice introduction to the story. I like how you made her immortality more of a burden... A lot of people would be thrilled to never have to worry about death, but don't realize how lonely an eternity can be once all your loved ones have passed. Plz update!
Fanfic.finatic2.0 chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
sorry. heres the link.
watch?vm4XGEzTOfdY&listPL1TJscb5BZApg9IgyNJEw8Ojxma3eKgz4
Fanfic.finatic2.0 chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
some one made a soundtrack for timless, go check it out.
heres the link, watch?vm4XGEzTOfdY&listPL1TJscb5BZApg9IgyNJEw8Ojxma3eKgz4
Amali Roarka chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
Damn, almost killed Ash! Ccc.
Yay, good story, can't wait for chappy 8. c:
Also, thanks to you, too, for writing for us
Croatia xD
Fanfic.finatic2.0 chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
wow thank you so much MoB I love each of my reviewers and I really am glad to see that my story is loved by so many people. to answer some questions, no Margret does not have a holograph for tie leaping. and yes even angels feet hurt. and don't worry, I will be adding a ton of supernatural beings into the story. if you guys like this then PLEASE SHARE with friends, family, neighbors... etc. it would be really AWESOME if this would go to be something even BIGGER!
MoB chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
Fallen Angels are good for fictional Literature ,but remember Satin has a way of disguising himself as an "angel of light". I was kept intrigued and wanted more .Keep writing and express your ideas and may the fiction live on . Good Job
MoB chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
You still have my attention!
MoB chapter 4 . 11/24/2013
Are these messengers good or Evil?Lets find out !
MoB chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
You have my attention,but can fallen angels have pain in their feet?
MoB chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
When Margaret leaps into time ,does she appear as a hologram?
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