Reviews for Expresso
Deepsouth chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
"This was how this world were."
'were' - a grammar error, but commendable given the previous sentence's tense. However, it probably should be: "This was how the world is." (Present tense.)
Past tense would be 'was'. Future tense would be "will be". Depends upon her point of view, which is changing as she drinks her coffee.

Just thought I'd let you know seeing as you are going to submit this story for a contest.