|Reviews for One More Second Chance|
| nobidreams chapter 12 . 1/20/2017
This was love at its rawest and simplest and most mundane form brought to light in the most beautiful way. Honestly everything about this story: the timing, the descriptions, the narration was real. I honestly didn't think I would love any other story after Gideon's and Nola's romance. But I thought I would give another story a second chance (pun intended) and was happily almost brought to tears by this ending. I really hope you will be published in the future. People need to discover your renditions of love. It's art!
| Du chapter 12 . 3/25/2016
Oh this ending was so beautiful. I loved, loved this story. There is something about yor writing... You portray the most normal, mundane things and yet you manage to make the reader feel such emotion through it all. I loved how real it all felt, Noah's alcoholism, Grace leaving him, and then how he picked himself up, not because he needed her back, but because he needed himself back. That felt powerfully real. I loved how their coming back together was a long process, over months... How it progressed slowly, from calling each other sweet names, to a kiss on the forehead, to finally giving it their all in bed. It was extremely sweet, real, emotional.
Wonderfully beautiful. Thank you for sharing this story with us, too. I hope you lead a life of happiness.
| slcjnk2008 chapter 12 . 1/30/2016
Great story. I love your ability as a writer. It's awesome.
| Ami chapter 12 . 4/21/2015
I really love this..I can feel the pain and the love and happiness.. best story ever..
| rainreverie chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
wow. I'm completely drawn in after just reading the first chapter. I love your other works and thought I'd give this a shot, and so far I am definitely not disappointed. Can't wait to see what's next!
| fonrocks chapter 12 . 11/25/2013
| Van chapter 12 . 11/24/2013
Awww...perfect. Just perfect. Thanks for this. :)
| Van chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
I could picture a gorgeous pregnant Grace strolling down the aisle. Nice touch with the baby's kick. Great chapter.
| Van chapter 10 . 11/24/2013
This is a modern day fairy tale, a feel good story, delivered beautifully.
| Van chapter 9 . 11/24/2013
My heart just exploded.
| Van chapter 8 . 11/24/2013
I'm going to go have a cigarette. I don't smoke but I feel a cigarette is appropriate after reading this chapter.
| Van chapter 7 . 11/24/2013
Oh no, how sick is she? Hopefully not sick enough that he'll fall off the wagon.
| Van chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
No, no, no. He's supposed to have 1 year sober before starting a relationship. What if he messes up? This is dangerous, very dangerous. But I'm excited to read how this unfolds. :)
| Van chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
I really wanted him to stay but I'm glad you went the realistic route and had him leave. Nice.
| Van chapter 4 . 11/24/2013
Sexy chapter with no sex. I love it.