Reviews for One More Second Chance |
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foxyricanlady chapter 7 . 10/15/2013 I like this Ryan guy he seems like he could be a good friend to Noah... |
foxyricanlady chapter 6 . 10/15/2013 You have me squealing like a 12 yrs old...lol I'm so glad that she give home another chance well one last second change like she said... |
atlalok33 chapter 5 . 10/14/2013 this is such a great story, and very original. update soon? |
Sarah.Victoria.E chapter 5 . 10/14/2013 I've just found out about you as a writer, from SKOW, and I love your writing! I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where you take it. |
dream-beautiful chapter 5 . 10/13/2013 Update soon please, I need an excuse to not do my homework! For some reason my update emails from FP were going into my spam box so I didn't see any of these till now. Love this story, and this chapter was so adorable. You've developed Noah so well, but I still feel like I don't know Grace that well. Other than that, great job and keep writing! :) :) |
Choukou chapter 4 . 10/2/2013 "Hey, beautiful," he murmured as he leaned down for her to buss his cheek. I just commented on the 5th chapter, but did you mean to say "brush"? |
Choukou chapter 5 . 10/2/2013 Love love love this story. I got so busy I didn't have time to read until two updates were out! I really like that the story is moving at a believable pace where they just don't jump into each others arms right away, but I still wish for them to get all romantic! I'll just have to wait to see what happens in the rest of the chapters! |
AccountkillerO1 chapter 5 . 10/2/2013 Great chap! |
foxyricanlady chapter 5 . 10/2/2013 Aaawww that was so sweet of him to take care of her like that... I like the pace you're taking with this story it's not to fast or in a hurry to get them back together... please update soon |
KoriLee123 chapter 5 . 10/2/2013 this one was really, cute. I love it, can't wait for more! |
Mariposa-12 chapter 5 . 10/1/2013 I love these two. Sorry i haven't had the time to leave a review even though i sure make the time to read your updates. You never disappoint with your stories. I love that you always have characters that are real. Not just some sappy stories that have no purpose and are simply two people falling in love and livign happily ever after. Your stories are real and that's why they get us so into them. You're definitely not predictable at all and you always have something fresh and different to write about. I'm loving these two and can't wait for them to finally get to their new version of their love. The deep, meaningful and healthy version. They seem to have the passion still intact which is great so i can imagine how explosive that reunion will be haha. Looking forward to more, as always. Thanks for the update! |
foxyricanlady chapter 4 . 9/30/2013 That was a great chapter... please update soon |
AccountkillerO1 chapter 4 . 9/27/2013 AWWW! Their definitely the cutest ppl ever! AND YES! I am so not letting you give up this beauty just bec ppl cant give some words of acknowledgement! This is an amazing story and you are an amazing author so no worries! |
KoriLee123 chapter 4 . 9/27/2013 I'm honestly in love with this story. I can't wait to read more 3 |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/26/2013 I didn't review the last few chapters because I don't have anything to say aside from the fact that they're just too cute! I really want to watch them build their relationship back up. I completely believe their emotions pinging back and forth between them. I normally hate stories where people get back together after breaking up, or people completely change their lives around, because to me, it's just not realistic, but Noah comes off as a completely genuine character. |