Reviews for Observations
CountryGal12 chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
[Review for the Review Game Forum]

I enjoyed this. I really did. I got lost a few times, but I eventually got back on track.

I liked how the rhymes blended with each other. It went well with the message of the poem.

I loved Canto 4. [Now is the time to change,

To release our bonds, release our chains.

Never go back to this past here,

And always see, always hear.]

That really captivated me. I'm impressed.
Lord D'arcy Picklesouse chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Some grammatical errors but nonetheless good...i liked the second canto...humans by nature are selfish and guarded...it results in lousy relationships even friendships...the rhymes are maintained...and lets see...what else comes from that head...btw...you'll feel liberated in free verse... only an advice though...