Kudos. Good story. Well done.

So now that I've read this story, I have to ask: WHY THE HELL IS THERE NOT A SEQUEL?! Seriously, this is just BEGGING for a sequel! Like, it could be their first time together for a one-shot, a lot of their little firsts together since Olly is new to relationships in general. A sequel could include more ghosts, Olly could help solve some kind of crime, help someone else who is being haunted, see more of his family at like a holiday get-together with Keegan... Ugh just lots of possibilities!

I like their names by the way. I had a story with a guy named Keegan years ago... I could probably find it if I looked XD

Frankie kind of made me laugh, as did Keegan and how things turned out. This is not a bad thing. I know Frankie loved Keegan, but when he tried to like, stay away and torment him by not being there and then showing up expecting Keegan to just jump into his arms and beg him to come back, that made me laugh because I could totally see him being like that. And then Keegan kind of made me laugh and smile because with Frankie he was obviously the... more subdued of the two. He let Frankie call the shots and let him be in charge and take care of him and everything. And then with Olly it's like he's the one in charge now because Olly is new at everything like that. It's very cute and made me smile :)

AND WHY DID YOU CUT OUT THE SMUT... I might have to find a way to virtually smack you for that. Some day. Gah.

But yeah this story is practically begging for a sequel. Hint-hint nudge-nudge ;) Cough-cough.

Anyway this was a great story and I enjoyed it :) Thanks for sharing!

Loved this
Thanks for sharing xx

Pretty cute story and interesting plot. Well-done characters. Much enjoyed :)

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I don't want it to end. Sad times. xx

so cute!

This was perfect! I just wanted to keep saying "Aww" throughout the whole chapter. Thank you for posting such an original and awesome work here! Good luck for your future writings!

O.O

Oh yeah. Frankie definitely cares. Although awkward with Ollie. And then O.O about Martin. Poor Keegan. He just never gets it easy.

Frankie... He stays in this wierd place for me. Sometimes he's a complete jerk, but then he does something nice, cares for Keegan. And I don't know the back story to Keegan's cravings, so now I'm wondering if there's something more there.

They are both so timid. It's adorable!

No this is coming to an end soon?this is preposterous! Uncalled for! I would than see the end. How about we bargain? My soul for more chapters aye? Sounds fair to me.

i have no other words other than i Really love your story!

Oh no! Nooo! Why did he do that? He must really want to be with Keegan that he wants to deal with Lillith before starting anything with Keegan. But, he still shouldn't have gone alone! Great chapter and please update soon! :)

This was a really intense couple of chapters. I kinda don't want the story to end. Looking forward to the next installment. Keep it up :).