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![]() ![]() Noooo! You can't stop here! Please update soon, I must know what happens next! Thank you for posting! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have finally caught up after a hectic week at work. Sorry for the late reviews but this is really good. I was proper freaked out and I love it. You're good with suspense and I love the tension between Olly and Keegan. Keep it up! I want more! |
![]() ![]() Wow! This had me at the edge of my seat! I really want Olly and Keegan to kill Lilith (very fitting name for her by the way). It's too bad that Olly's aunt couldn't make two charms for the both of them! Great chapter and looking forward to the next on! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapters are great long chapter's are better! Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Mmm.. I think there might be a clue where Olly placed his hand in the hallway. So anxious about what they will find! This chapter wasn't too scary since Olly still has his personality, which definitely brightens up the situation. Please make your work as frightful as you'd like without fear of your readers not reading and update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Prodding at a lion with a stick I see. Cliffhangers and jutting rocks parading on new terrance. Still my roaring and vast belly. Replenish my needyness to full stock. My pants shouldn't fit and my legs shall weaken under my weight with your passionate writing! Feed the beast that you have created! Or it will be your last! |
![]() ![]() I had to turn on my bedside lamp at the last part. It's starting to get scary, not knowing when the three ghosts are going to possess Olly. I really hope nothing bad happens to Keegan. Can't wait for your next update! :) And I'm glad you're enjoying my recommendation. The author truly is great. |
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![]() ![]() Well, I'm surprised Frankie wasn't upset/jealous over them going on a trip. I'm interested in how the charm would help and their upcoming trip. Thank you for posting and please update soon! :) On the note of stories to read on here, I sincerely recommend reading 'His Eyes' by Dianaartemis. The story is going to be taken down soon and it is my favorite work that always manages to move me to tears. It is truly an unique story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a really intense couple of chapters. I loved the drama and the action. Well done. :) |
![]() ![]() Ah, Olly's happiness is contagious! I also want Keegan to give him a hug and never let go! I look forward to your next chapter. Happy writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happiness in the hospital... oh, and happy holidays to you. This story is progressing nicely. Thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a very powerful chapter. I had a lump in my throat the entire time. Good job in the atmosphere. Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally loved the kinda flirting tension in this chapter. It was pretty interesting and I liked the mirror imagery. I'm loving it as always. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww this was intense. Though I don't know if i'm meant to like Frankie or not but I kinda don't lol. Still interesting about Olly/Jared. Write more soon :) |