This is getting really good. I'm loving the tension and the description is great. Keep up the good work and write more soon cause I want to know what happens. A very interesting storyline so far. :-)

i may have read it ring bht is frankie frabkie or robbie?
good start though

great start :)
not sure what to make of the boyfriend. he seems mean and nice towards Keegan.
looking forward to future chapters.