This is both funny, sad, and entirely too familiar. It makes me think about what it took to get to that point of intervention, which is the sad part. The voice is so vivid and real to me. I've noticed that most of your dialogue is really realistic and well done. So far this is my favorite piece.

I love this idea- self intervention. Not something people think of.

This is so perfect. You paint such a clear picture of the past and this is brilliant!

I'm surprised to read something so profound and polished after reading a profile full of modesty about your writing. Well done! Please don't ever stop writing - I'm adding you to my favorites.