This was a great poem! I dint really know much about poetry, but it sounded cool, I'm pretty sure that means its good :p. I particularly liked ' whether you live in a castle of a house with a creaky rafter'... That was an awesome line. Thanks heaps :D

I love it!

This is a really cute poem :)
This just makes me want to shout these words out to those people who date others, just because they are going for the person's body...

I partly agree with this. I think in 'one moment' you can like someone, it's love that takes time. Still, a great poem, good job!