Reviews for Watch Me Fall Apart
Jinw chapter 2 . 4/21/2020
please please please update this or i WILL go crazy :'( wtf am i supposed to do with my life now?
Jinw chapter 1 . 4/21/2020
oh finally! FINALLY! i was WAITING for Quan to stand up for himself.
danazit7 chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
I dont know if you still on this website but if you are please you have to continu this story its soooooo gooood. I need to knoe how they got back together.
somersaultkick chapter 2 . 1/4/2016
These one shots are very good and the time skips are done well. They are my OTP now xD
somersaultkick chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
This is so sad! *cries huhuh
Ishotthealbatross chapter 2 . 9/24/2015
Sadness all around, huh?
Really well-written chapter :)
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 9/24/2015
Now I feel bad for Derik *cries*
ToBreakMyFall chapter 2 . 6/18/2015
this is so great, ma. I read all the other Quan and Derik stuff too and they are just perfection, probably my favorite stories on this site right now. Nice work!
Theresa chapter 2 . 5/24/2015
I was wondering if you were going to update Derik and Quan's story again? I really liked it, but noticed you hadn't made any new additions to it in a pretty long time...
Guest chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
I almost cannot believe that derik and Quan break up . Nooo they're meant to beeee.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
Please update this story is fucking gooolden lol. I absolutely love it.
EyeLuvEminem chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Umm... Holy shit you're amazing. I love Quan. He.. breaks my heart. He's a beautiful person! Can't wait to read more about these guys.
GrangerDanger333 chapter 2 . 3/23/2014
Please finish this one day? :) I love reading and re-reading Quan and Derik's story!
marginal-utility chapter 2 . 1/17/2014
These kids get themselves in so much s***!
Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Honestly? I think this is actually quite a nice introduction to the characters, even without having read some of the other stuff (yet). You don’t push anything in the face of the reader, don’t make whatever is going on between them painfully obvious, and do a really good job of letting the characters speak for themselves. I really like the idea you’re portraying of Quan maybe having been perceived as the weaker of the two, and it works well to show just how far he’s been pushed to snap like he does. There’s an interesting dynamic between the two, even here, and it certainly gives a solid hook to make the reader carry on. Good stuff, nicely written. Keep it up.
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