this was so beautiful and passionate

This was such a beautiful one-shot. Their need was palpable, and explosive; leaving me awed and hot under the collar. Thank you ever so much for this. I would love to read a multi chapter story from you.

That was a great piece of writing. At the beginning I could see the UST it was so palpable and then I almost fell off my seat going, Will they, won't they... When the moment came, it was tasteful but DEFINITE, no coy suggestions of what he did to the narrator, unlike me who, well, isn't always so direct. And I also liked that the emotional was balanced with the physical, so this wasn't smut but it also wasn't melodramatic without substance.

Crying! Crying! Crying! Oh Jesus Lord how I love this story.

That was hot your super good at this I wish I could have read this as soon as it was done thanks for an awsome one shot :-) :-D loved it you could also continue this story (just a thougjt I think it would be popular)

I think their names are James (the best friend) and... Nicolas. Nicholas? No, Nicolas.
Very artfully written.

Wow. I can't believe this is the best thing I've ever read. But in all honesty, it's the best story I've ever read. Can't believe that someone of this earth wrote this gorgeous love story.

Aahh! I loved this so much! Really wonderful! As for names... Gah! I don't know! I'll have to think about it so for now they are just namesless- but beautiful- characters.

Wow. If only I could map my heartbeats, plot all the highs in a graph, solve all the extreme tender emotions you have managed to arise through this intense story of yours, I would. This was truly a beautiful read, in every sense of the word.
Write more, love more, grow more... I wish you all the best! You have made my day. Thank you.

That was a wonderful love story :)

"I need you to steal my innocence" was my favorite! Beautiful story :) I want more...

Hello! You are a lovely writer, I just wanted to point out that they had pens, not quills, by 1878. Sorry, it's stupid, but there it is.

Deeply moving. I didn't expect this to be a bit intense. Thanks. I enjoyed it. x

Wow, this was beautifully written :) I love that you incorporated appropriate language for the time period, and how timid and passionate it all is. I feel like these characters are actually MAKING LOVE, which is an impressive feat on Fictionpress :)

Oh my