That was great. You managed to create a wonderful amount of tension, whilst not making it ott. The characters really shone as well. You can definitely tell that you spent a long time on it because it's beautifully polished. I even like the old fashioned style in the narrative - it was
convincing and added a lot to the feel of the story.
Thank you for sharing your work, I look forward to checking out your profile.
- Pantu

Aww I loved it. It was beautiful and angsty, and so very well written.

That was lovely! Very classy, very well done. Brava;)

You left me speechless. This story is so beautifully written. I love how you got into the main characters personality. The way you depicted each characters feeling was well. I was nervous and anxious just as the main character. I was practically biting my nails through out this story and I could feel the pain and need of the character. Also, the words used to write the story were picked with meaning. Each word used blended in perfect harmony as I read. Though it took you a year to write, you didn't lose the feeling and sense of the story. As for the character's name, I had some in mind as I was reading and I like the way you allowed freedom for the reader to pick out their names. If I were to hear their names in the end of the story, it might've clashed with the names I had in my mind. X3 My favourite I need was the "I need you". That simple phrase spoke out for all the other I needs.

Oh gosh, I'm usually not a fan of slash fics but I absolutely had to give this a chance because I love all of your stories. I'm glad I read this! The raw emotion, ugh, it killed me. I do enjoy the fact that you left them nameless; it just made it that much more interesting :) Thanks for the great read! I look forward to whatever you put out in the future!

I loved it! Then again, I always love your stories!