Reviews for Mercy
dulcee chapter 11 . 5/25/2016
I've been checking this fic every few weeks for the last three years in hopes for an update ahha. There's just something so captivating about your story that I find myself coming back to it all the time! I hope you're doing well wherever you are- and if you ever have any extra time, I'll love you to death if you posted a few snippets of what happens next! 3
Faereh chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
love this!
MiranDuranDa chapter 12 . 11/12/2014
No! You can't end it there! It's been a year long horrible cliff hanger [ please please please consider updating for the year anniversary of your last update? Mercy's fantastic, I love him. I want to see how he gets out of this... I mean, his dad never said he couldn't tell anyone about the order...

Why are all the stories itchy he best written characters left unfinished?
dulcee chapter 12 . 10/30/2014
Oh gosh, this is so good! I'm just DYING to know what happens next!
Oh man... Bentley is like my most favorite character, so I hope he doesn't die! I'll burst out in tears of despair if he does :(
I love how Mercy's brother was at first seen as a bad guy, but it turns out that the father was the cause of all the misfortune. Excellent twist. I hope his father gets what he deserves - preferably in an icy, burning, fantastic road to hell. Ugh. And Antonio as well... screw him!
I disliked David for a bit after the whole coffee shop incident, but he's starting to grow on me! Tbh a part of me wants Mercy x Bentley just because they are so frickin adorable. That butterfly scene sent my heart into overdrive 3
I wonder when will Mercy meet Eric Holloway - the real one? I'm curious to see Eric's reaction and how David will deal with his brother.
Ahh, so much to look forward to! I see its been about a year since the last update - but I hope you don't give up on this story! It has lots of potential and I'm so completely immersed in the world and the characters that I'm, like...shaking in my seat, haha. Thank you for this wonderful tale, and I hope one day you will continue it!
R. Ficst chapter 12 . 9/16/2014
AHHHH!

I'm completely and totally hooked, completely and totally in love with your story, and am now cut off!

Your characters, world-building, relationships, pacing, layers of plot complexity, and emotion are all brilliantly executed.

I really do hope you complete this story.
Thank you so much for posting.
BleacherAnon chapter 12 . 8/20/2014
Possible good news everyone! I saw on wattpad that Mercy may be updated. I hope so, I am thoroughly hooked. I came across this when I was getting my GrimmIchi fix. I wish this was on tv! I wasn't initially going to read this because I am wary about reading unfinished works. Its not that I am impatient, I have just been burned too many times waiting a year for something to update. This would be a great book series. All said unfortunetly I really think this site needs to consider flagging authors notorious for never finishing their works.
blackkitties chapter 12 . 8/8/2014
I wish you'd update, I miss this so dearly
Amiacifi chapter 12 . 7/31/2014
Hope you are doing alright in life, I know you are super busy but all of us will be excited the day you come back with another update!
Lauren chapter 12 . 7/27/2014
Thank you for such a beautiful story so far :) I hope that life's not giving you too much stress. I look forward to more chapters, if there are any to come :)
Liviania chapter 12 . 7/12/2014
This is a really fun story! I like Mercy and David's relationship, Antonio is nicely threatening, and I'm curious about what will happen next.
Themadbutterfly chapter 12 . 7/6/2014
Are you ... Dead? RIp
No-mama chapter 12 . 7/6/2014
Omg! Your dead! Nooooopo! Please don't be dead! Why is there no update in almost a year! Why do people do this to readers. Seriously, your life cannot be. "That Busy" to update a chapter. I have lost one precious soul this last year and this fandom and story are my escape . So please update soon because besides really really wanting to know what happens ... :(
nonaccount chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Hmm, I'm intrigued and look forward to more.
franny221 chapter 12 . 5/27/2014
Just read this all in one go; I really like the story! The plot actually reminds me a bit of White Cat by Holly Black-main character who is alienated from his criminal family, has a brother with the ability to manipulate memories, and gets stuck in a plot to kill someone at a party. Anyways, I like this story as much as I liked White Cat, so that's saying something good :) Eager to read more!
semantics chapter 12 . 5/9/2014
Wow! This story was so full of suspense and the plot thickens every moment. I can't believe Mercy's father would kill his own wife for adultery when he cheated himself! I hope Bentley will be ok! Please please :-( I hope you update soon, I don't think I can wait!

Other than that, I loved Mercy's wit, but it seems he is very high and proud, that one. And it looks like Cerberus is much much kinder than Mercy remembers and seems to actually be the hero in this!
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