Reviews for Mercy
chibikodo chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
Whoa this Annie chick is cray-cray! Who is she? Some super villain's daughter or just a normal crazy wannabe groupie? Poor Mercy. Things were going so well with David. :( more please?
Depth-of-Field chapter 3 . 10/3/2013

I really like your story. Mercy is such a mopey young adult and you've written him really realistically (or as realistically as superheros can be). He's so haughty and lonely and pushy. :D love it!
Round About Parker chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
I really love this so far. The end of this chapter seems like it's going to set a lot of things in motion and I can't wait to see it :)
Guest chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
, more soon !
yuri chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
this chapter was heartbreaking. Kinda a little pissed at David for being a hypocrite.
Abrasive chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
In the days long ago when I used to write stories I never really liked the reviews which just said OMG UPDATE PLZ!1!1! But when I read your story I find it difficult to resist the desperate urge to write that. Your story is only two chapters in and already it's addictive. I'm particularly enjoying the increased examination into exactly what life must be like for Mercy coming from such a notorious family. It's hard not to sympathise with the poor guy.

I'm already hungry for more of the story. It's looking awesome so far. Annie is actually a little terrifying, but I'm not sure yet if she's going to be the main villain or if that's reserved for someone else (Cerberus, maybe?). So much intrigue.

It might be good to get some more description of the story's setting, or even just the universe they're living in, but so far it's all pretty good. Keep it up. :)

helinS chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Really love the beginning. Mercys family sounds like trouble. Cant wait for reading more :D
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
yay !
lovesyoumore chapter 2 . 9/27/2013
I freaking love this story. Can't wait for more!
chibikodo chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Intriguing. David and Buzz both sound like they'll be making Mercy's college life very interesting. His family on the otherhand sounds like nothing but trouble. Oh and this Annie chick sounds suspcious. Looking forward to reading more
Abrasive chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
This is great! Your writing is awesome and the characters are super intriguing so far. Looking forward to reading more. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
fun !
jshortcake chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
This looks good so far, I'm looking forward to the next installments. Thanks for writing!
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