|Reviews for Mercy|
| semantics chapter 12 . 5/9/2014
Wow! This story was so full of suspense and the plot thickens every moment. I can't believe Mercy's father would kill his own wife for adultery when he cheated himself! I hope Bentley will be ok! Please please :-( I hope you update soon, I don't think I can wait!
Other than that, I loved Mercy's wit, but it seems he is very high and proud, that one. And it looks like Cerberus is much much kinder than Mercy remembers and seems to actually be the hero in this!
| flawedxuni chapter 12 . 5/4/2014
I'm really terrible with reviewing. I don't normally leave reviews because I just never no what to say. Even when I love a story I'm really clueless. No matter what I'll always sound either fangirly or just bland. But I keep thinking about your story and I just had to leave something!
I literally just discovered it today and I'm both glad and disappointed that I did - glad cause this was f'ing awesome and it's been literally months since I've been able to read an original fic and fall so hard for the characters and plot. disappointed cause now I've gotta wait for an update. I really wish I found this after you were back to updating again, or maybe when it was completed. Cause now the wait will be hard (but manageable of course)
I love love love your characters. The way you write them, and seriously, the side characters like Spencer and Bentley and Dominick (Idk if i spelled that right) I love seeing them and i'm really picky about side characters. like, most of the time I skim or tempt to skim when they appear cause they take away from the MC's time and everything. But god, not these! I want to see them! I'd love to see them more often - and I hope you still plan on writing a Spencer/Bentley fic cause I'd sooooo read that ;) ahem.
Now of course I loathe Richard and Antonio cause they're baddies and we're not supposed to like them :) and I think we weren't supposed to like Mercy's brother but he's become a favorite of mine (the hug really did me in, let me tell you... and kiss... i'm like super into incesty stuff even though this isn't incest just, y'know id ship them if it were ever possible lol)
I'm curious as to why he torments Mercy though. Is it to keep the secret hidden? To keep him safe from Richard? Or... i don't know. I mean, if what Antonio is saying is true then he cares for Mercy. He didn't want him to die from Richard. He protected him.
and now Mercy is gonna be destroyed if he kills Eric cause that will ruin is whole life, not to mention tear him apart for not only killing but hurting David in the process :/
Mercy never get a break! Poor guy. After all this he needs a serious vacation - with David :D of course. away from everyone and everything.
I was gonna be more intellectual and try and leave a serious review but like I said, I'm terrible with these. So sorry if I'm rambly/fangirlly/etc. I love this story and I'm excited to read more of it in the future! :)
| miaou chapter 12 . 4/30/2014
;-; I need a heaping dose if sugar after this chapter. oh gawd.
| anonymous chapter 12 . 4/13/2014
| obsessed chapter 12 . 3/25/2014
like holy shit.
YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE US HANGING AFTER A PLOT TWIST LIKE THAT!
YOU INCREDIBLE WRITER YOU!
| obsessed chapter 11 . 3/25/2014
| obsessed chapter 3 . 3/25/2014
OMG. I WAS HOOKED THE MINUTE I READ CHAPTER 1! THIS IS MY NEW FAVE STORY! unfortuantly i just had to start reading this at midnight when I have an early class tomorrow...oh well, your story is worth it! I will not sleep till I've finished reading it all! :D
| gu chapter 12 . 3/23/2014
Mercy/Cerebus plz mmm fine
| Mandy S. Bryan chapter 12 . 3/21/2014
Really good story. Hope you update soon!
| DandyChance chapter 12 . 1/19/2014
Oh snap. This is getting all sorts of Ella Enchanted.
| Starlite Nightfall chapter 12 . 1/17/2014
I AM SO ANGRY. SO ANGRY. SO VERY ANGRY. GAH. MERCY IS SO SPINELESS SOMETIMES GAH. I love this story and these characters so much, but damn does Mercy frustrate the shit out of me with his inability to function lol. Please update soon so my rage can subside after some sort or redeeming and/or resolute chain of events. I NEED IT. Why did I read this entire story before bed. Now I'm gonna be mad about all the ways Mercy could have avoided this if he had a spine. GAH. GAAAAH. LOOK WHAT YOU'VE BROUGHT UPON YOURSELF, MAN. STABBING YOUR FRIEND AIN'T COOL, MAN. I look forward to more of this excellent story and hopefully some good ol' fire and ice lovin at some point. Oh my
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Hello, i'd just like to say please update soon. Thank you.
| Lani chapter 12 . 1/2/2014
You lied to me. There was no update. Jerk.
| camipie928 chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
Are you going to update anytime? I'm dying to know what happens
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/27/2013
I love this story! I really hope you're still writing it - I'll just keep worrying about Mercy till you do!