Reviews for Mercy
chibikodo chapter 12 . 11/24/2013
! Nooo don't kill off Buzz. That'd be horrible. If there's a casualty I'd rather it be Mercy's older brother sacrificing himself. The real question is... Why is Antonio so hell bent on pursuing his father? Especially when the man really did nothing for him?
Guest chapter 12 . 11/24/2013
oh my gosh. :D love the plot. i really didn't see the objective of antonio's ways until this chapter. thanks for the chapter! :)
rosieroo chapter 12 . 11/24/2013
AHHHHH you're killing me. This chapter was great, it flowed so well. And I honestly did not expect these twists at all. Seriously, FANTASTIC job, it is so hard to find a great story with a great twist or two! I can't wait for this next chapter omgomgomg
PhreshxxxBear chapter 12 . 11/24/2013
No! As annoying as I found Bentley, he can't die! And No! Cerberus is a good guy! Don't punish him! Haha, this is why I am not a character. I'd be annoying and in eveyone business screaming "no!" all the time.
chibikodo chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
Mercy, you're such an unfortunate soul. David's jealousy is both endearing and overbearing.

The cliffhanger! Whyyyy haha :)
rgrimes89 chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
Ahh cliffhanger!

Can't get enough of this. David is definitely winning his way back - and I'm growing to love the fact that he can be quite brash and bossy :)

Mercy is such a doll! I love every moment he's prissy or superior and I want to protect him every moment he's in danger!

Annie is fascinating - he seems to want revenge? I could be wrong! I'm looking forward to finding out.

Thank you for sticking to your deadline - the quality of the story and characters is so high I imagine it's a lot of work to get it done in time. I hope this story never ends lol!
ss chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
More! *throws hearts*
rosieroo chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
Did you update this one and the last one one after the other? Because I only got the notification for chapter11, not chapter 10! Needless to say, it was a pretty awesome surprise to get two chapters instead of one haha. I loooove this but hate the cliffhangers! Every time, you're killing me! Still loving it so much. I really like how you didn't stereotype Cereberus' character or exaggerate him. He was low-key but I felt like he is going to be a real, 3D character that I can't wait to find out more about. This is really strange for me, but I'm liking the rest of the story more than the romance - it's normally the other way around, and I'm not saying that the romance isn't good, because it's amazing. It's just all amazing!
glowstick145 chapter 11 . 11/17/2013
super curious about Annie ugh ugh
Also what the heckie you got me all excited for Eric and then whoops not Eric
And why does mercy keep lying to david, get your shit together mercy
pleasedanon chapter 10 . 11/17/2013
Cerberus is a complete cutie and I kindofsortof want some brothercest because wowzers, very affectionate. i'msosorry but i'm a compelte sucker for 'everyone-wants-the-protagonist' stories, SQUEAL. your characters are lovely, your style is loving, you are lovely, m'dear, hpe you feel better.
Leonie chapter 10 . 11/17/2013
Bloody hell darling, you've gotten me hooked on this story! I'm in love with all the characters hjfhskfjdsjks and the story/world you've created is quite intriguing, I'm dying to know more about the Doyles and the Holloways! The banter between Mercy and David is wonderful and Spencer is my kind of complicated asshole!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/14/2013
I actually really liked cerebus... His intensity and depths.. I kinda slash him and mercy. Maybe they aren't really bros? Either way I still slash them lol!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/12/2013
Update soon !
chibikodo chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
Lol David should have listened to Mercy. Interesting... Wonder what Cerberus is playing at with Mercy... Actual affection and a twisted sense of trying to protect Mercy by making him stronger through torment. Or something else. Alsoooo Eric showing up makes me wonder what's going down.
Antiqua-hime17 chapter 10 . 11/10/2013
Lol get out of one scary in counter and get stuck in another, they have worse please update soon
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