Reviews for Mercy
La Imperatrice chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
I really like this story. The plot is really engaging and certainly original, and your characters feel real. I can't wait until the next chapter, this story is the best one I've read in awhile.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2013
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PhreshxxxBear chapter 5 . 10/10/2013
Hohoho! Indeed this story is very entertaining! I do hope you update soon. I'm liking this already!
ss chapter 5 . 10/10/2013
Yay, an update! Wow, Antonio was unexpected. Hope we meet the secretly caring for his brother, Cerebus soon, though hopefully not as Antonio's love interest or anything.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/9/2013
A perfect twist in a wonderful story you never disappoint desperately anticipating the next chapter
chibikodo chapter 5 . 10/9/2013
Ack Annie is just freaky! The face rearranging thing, the stalking. Yeesh. Poor Mercy. What an ironic nickname.

Also, Buzz seems rather hopeless. Poor Mercy doesn't have many allies (friends).
Guest chapter 4 . 10/9/2013
villians and heros fun
Sammythesmith chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
I am completely in love with this story and the fascinating characters. I am looking forward to a slow but sure warming up relationshipwise between David and Mercy, they just seem to be opposites but ultimately love will make them whole. Can't wait!
helinS chapter 4 . 10/6/2013
Yay, finally Mercy has a friend. My favorite chapter so far :D
Guest chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Wow I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, I can wait for more. Your characters are developed and I really root for them. I really like how the abilities of the various people is subtle, just a part of life like breathing, it's an interesting twist. Keep up the awesome work!
silversorceress chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Really enjoyed reading it. Curious how strong Mercy is though in comparison to the other students. Update soon :]
Mercy Me chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
I love Mercy! Everything about him is fascinating. I love that he has attitude but that really he's trying to protect himself. I love the theme and the plot -David is going to start feeling very guilty at somepoint And I can't imagine Mercy letting him in very easily now.

Also you've set the brother up to be an amazing villain - I hope you can pull it off. Judging by the writing so far I think u can and that's even more exciting!
yuri chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Gahhh all the talk about the older brother has me curious!
chibikodo chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Mercy was a little emo this chapter but he has a reason to be. Poor Mercy. David will hopefully be feeling guilty.

And this Annie chick is nutso. I'm thinking if Mercy's brother scares him more than she does.. Then she miiight be wiser to stop what she's doing. Haha

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
Oh mercy my heart bleeds for you this story sucks you in quickly
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