|Reviews for the story of Beauty|
| ophelias-dolls chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
| My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
I love it! The sentence structure makes it sound so archaic and beautiful, and "hatch" gives it a great image, like an egg hatching...not sure how to put it :) Wonderful as always!
| TheForgottenWarrior chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
I'm a huge fan of haikus and the way you use such simple words to convey a much more profound topic. Nice job, as usual. :)
| Jun Li Kanashii chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
Oh! I love your poetry! I think I got it this time:
Even in the darkest times, we can find ways to blossom. Maybe the rain is a kind other person or just ourselves.
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
I really like this haiku, it's so optimistic! It makes me think that even in the dark and bad times, we can still grow from our mistakes and one day flower into the person we were always meant to be! Such a lovely haiku with some really beautiful imagery - I'm still in awe how you can create such a beautiful haiku with such powerful meaning in so few words. Beautiful as always.