Reviews for Four Months
eightysixzero chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Daniel does disap'er.
Anonymous Heavy on the Anon chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
I liked it a lot. I was very good.

There was one thing that bothered me though. What is with the italics? The italicized words seem to be random. Italics is used to show which words should have significant emphasis put on them, but I don't see the purpose of these particular words being emphasized is.

But besides, that, I loved the obvious frustration he had at, not so much his own death, but the death of his people and planet. I really think that this is what the last human on earth will feel like, because if there is nothing left for you to live for, why be upset about dying?

Great story, especially for an eighth grader!

- AHotA