I've taken entirely too long to review this, and for that I'm sorry. I have loved reading this story and as it is finished I find myself very sad, yet excited for the sequel. I have enjoyed getting to know every single character in this story. I was quite pleased with myself when Jake turned out to be a superhero because I guessed he was in the first chapter. I was also happy when Luke turned out to be as evil as I hoped. I love how well-rounded the story is and am glad you addressed every issue in this epilogue of sorts. I loved seeing Huntress as she mothered Shaped. And I loved Kaylene as an atypical superhero in her own right :)

OMG this has been great! Do tell when the next stories up!

Wow. That's one of the many words that describes this story, but it's grown to more than just a story. I really just want you to know, this book really makes my day every time it's updated. Every single chapter brings out emotion, and I'm glad to be able to say that it's the emotion intended. This book has actually made me laugh out loud, cry, cringe, scream at the characters in frustration, come close to smashing my device, and fangirl. Overall it's just beautiful. The plot, the writing, the pace, the planning, the character development, along with anything and everything else. That's not saying that you can't improve, because I profoundly believe everybody can. Truly, though, the improvements are very small. Also, one thing that has always stuck out at my in your writing is how amazingly real everything seems. I feel like I know every character, they are my neighbors, my best friends, the people I look up to, and my enemies. The way every feeling, look, and action is described; I know them. The reader has ups and downs with the characters. I can feel the energy, the nerves, the content, in every word during those moments. I can see the exact look on Jake's smiling face, the look on Jessica's face as she dances through the air, and Huntress' analyzing gaze. I can see everything in my mind. This story really does mean so much more by now, at least to me. Though these characters are fictional, and I haven't met then, to me they are real. They are my friends.
Never stop writing.

Your fan,
Silver
(...and this review was going to be short.)

Awwww! They make such a cute couple! I really enjoyed reading it (even though I don't think I ever commented) and I can't wait for the next book/series/thingie!

Gah! It was short but super sweet! Huntress holding Shapes' hand! And then she kissed him! My words aren't working. It was probably my favorite chapter so far, because all of the lovely family and friends feelings...

Gah! Huntress you mother hen! And Kaylene! What a beautiful person you are; who said you aren't brave? Next chapter is her making up with Jake right? Gosh I hope so... Also, I sent a link to your story so maybe you'll get another reader :) So, super excited! I have officially over-used the exclamation point... See you next chapter ;)

I was so close to just typing gibberish in... I have absolutely no idea how to respond to this other than: PERFECT! Honestly, I really wish I knew somebody who read this so I can talk about all my feels. I can't believe that a publisher wouldn't take this... I would by it a million times over I had the money because jeez... You definitely deserve more recognition for this wonderful piece of work and as always I'll wait (im)patiently for the next chapter.

omg I'm in love with thiss! please update soon :)

Oh god fluff! This was just what I needed after watching a heart-breaking episode of one of my favorite TV shows. Oh, the ambush is going to be so awkward. Kaylene's just going to keep blushing and Jake is going to avoid her, and she'll get all worried and apologize... I love your characters so much and I'm so glad that we finally got the kiss scene. And oh my god he KNEELED! Can he get any better? I am spazzing so much, sorry. Can the next chapter just come out today... Ugh, so much excitement... Is it really ending? Can it not? Gaaaah, I'm excited and sad at the same time...

Exciting! I really want to see her punch him in the face (well, read it anyway). Will he even show up? Or just tell the villain? Will she finally get kissed by Jake? Is Shapes going to show up and save the day? (That one's a long shot I know I just really want to see Shapes as a Superhero.) In short, I have outrageous theories purely because I super excited!

D'aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww! ...d'aaww...Sigh...My inner fangirl was squealing as I read this! They're just all so perfectly imperfect, and they just, ya'know...fit. Ohohoh! I have another thing to add to the list: Wear braids less often. Although, now that I think about it, I'm not sure. It would certainly make her less, well, her. That's why I take that back, because a Kay who barely wears braids is not the Kay currently in this story. However, the occasional day, every once in a while, with hair down wouldn't be bad.
My apologies for this review basically being a braid analyzation,
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Yes! Kaylene being awesome! Just what I wanted to see! I like how Jake isn't over protective and doesn't think she is super useless... That happens way too often in romances and people always use the excuse: "It's because he loves her." So big plus! I can't believe we're nearing the end though... I fell in love with this by the first chapter and will be sad to see it go (So I'm glad that there's going to be a sequel of sorts). Also, Is that Huntress beginning to trust her I see? hehehe, happiness all around! It'll be interesting to see how you top this chapter.

Since I didn't review on this chapter, but already reviewed in 37, I have to add what I gigot! Ah, yes, though I'm excited for super hero sidekick (I won't have to leave the universe!), and I'm sure I'll love it just as much as I love this story, it just won't be the same...
I need to stop before I cry,
Silver

So, there are kinda four things I want to open up this review with...
1. THAT'S RIGHT GIRL! FINALLY DITCHED HIM!
2. D'awwwww! :)
3. SQUEEEEEEEEEE! _
4. A cliffhanger?! -_-
Now, I can proceed to say that I have mentally created a fandom for this story, so I can mentally fangirl even more. And, I can add that I will be extremely sad when this story ends (by that I mean I will be in a state of shock and depression for a week while slowly coming to terms that I do not live in this universe you have created.). Hm...I was going to say more, but I got randomly distracted, and now I can't remember.
Until next chapter,
Silver

Jake to the rescue! Yah know, Kay is really starting to work on that list I made. I hate Luke more with every chapter, which is great, because I'm pretty sure that was what is intended. Another great chapter!
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Silver