This story is absolutely amazing! I love it! Can't wait for a new chapter!

Things Kay needs to do:
1.) Ditch Luke, fast.
2.) See the obvious.
3.) Fall madly in love with Jake.
4.) Wear nice clothes more often (really, she has no excuses...but maybe a little more practical than a skirt, with all the running away she'll do.).
5.) Prove herself to Huntress.
6.) Figure out who Shadow really is.
7.) Get her priorities straight.
8.) Make tons of great costumes with secret advantages, made of super material, which over all helps heroes be amazing.
Yes, that was kind of in order,
Silver

Eh, basically repeat my last review here. No, don't do it, that's wrong, etcetera...
Feeling lazy,
Silver

No. No. Don't do it Kay, don't do it! He's not good enough for you...*cringe* Something bad is going to happen, I know it. It's just wrong, kay and Luke. Anyways, Kay and Luke fluff is no where even approximately near to the amazing level that is Kay and Jake fluff. Hm, I'm rambling now, aren't I?
Best book I've read in a while,
Silver

Kaylene, you've got to start seeing the obvious! You like Jake, Jake likes you, and you. Will. Live. Happily. Ever. After. YOU WILL! You think he would have given you some sign if he liked you? Well, he helped rescue you from a bus in the path of a angry, violent, super villain with unnatural strength, all because of a backpack. Alas, Kaylene, alas. I think my obsession with this story grows every chapter, fueling my normal crazy fanning over a good story. I apologize ahead of time for any weird/crazy reviews, such as this one. :D
Read-a-holic-ly,
Silver

Ah, the wise and powerful Huntress has spoken yet again! I hope that you realize how great of an Author you are. That sounds kind of suck-up-y, but it's true. This story is WAY more entertaining than many published books I have read, and I have no idea why it had less than 30 reviews.
Keep calm and edit on,
Silver

Another great chapter! I seriously want to live in that world. 100,000,000% ...is that bad? XD Things are looking up for Kaylene again. That's never good. _
I hope you write forever,
Silver

I love this story! You are a great author, and I'm sorry for not reviewing until chapter 15. I already kind of guessed who shadow was, but I just want to let you know that you made a mistake that made it obvious...
"So we tell people that you are dressing up as your favorite hero. You can be preparing a cosplay for the summer Superhero Fan Convention," said Jake.
At this point, she's talking to Shadow, and she hasn't found out that he is Jake yet.

D'awww, Jake's so sweet! Sorry I didn't get a chance to review last chapter, but it was awesome (as always). I still wanna know how Luke is connected to the villains (and why Jake and Jessica don't seem to suspect him). And c'mon Kay, stop with the fantasies you silly little girl. Jake, tell you like her and she'll totally fall into your arms (sometimes I wonder why he likes her... sometimes). I'm getting to the point where I'm just writing whatever pops into my head so I'm gonna end this (as always) with looking forward to the next exciting chapter ;)

Squeeeee. I knew it! And finally! But ugh, she should know not to trust Luke by now. Warn Jake you silly girl!
P.S. I liked your Buffy reference
P.P.S I liked your Star Trek reference even more.

Heh heh heh... Jake is a techie. I knew it! And he liiiikes heeerrrr. I'm so immature I know. My prediction, Luke hired somebody to kill Kaylene because he thinks she is Blue. He is texting whoever he hired so that they know where she is... He can't do it himself because she might recognize him, but once she's out of the way he wants to go on a crime spree to take over the world. Perhaps he's related to a villain that Blue arrested. Whatever may happen I'm super excited to see how you write it :)

Oh my gosh! I love it! I've been on for ages, and I finally decided to check out fictionpress. Your story is THE FIRST I have read on here, super thanks. I too believe Luke is evil and JakeShadow. Also, for whatever reason, every time you do something good to your character, I want you to do something bad to her even though I really like her. Oh, and a couple of my friends have superhero blogs, check them out at .com and .com.

Is it sad that I read this whole chapter and the first thing I wanted to do is squeal over Shadow? Jessica's mom seems pretty cool; it'd be interesting if she showed up more. I hope Luke reveals himself as an evil mastermind and Shadow saves the day. Oooh, maybe the robot people will come and Shadow will deactivate them with his techie skills :D

Noooo, Kaylene, don't fall for his lies... He wanted your address so his villains could attack you while you were relaxed at home. Jake better go to that party and make sure she's alright. I am firmly holding onto my theory that Luke is evil. Mostly cuz I really don't like him but still.

Hehehehe, my brain is thinking about Jake again. Now why would Jessica leave Kay alone with him? What makes her think he can protect her? Obviously because he's shadow! I am so glad she finally noticed that she likes Jake. Now Kay just needs to realize that Luke is evil because he is the only one (other than the Supers) who connected her with Supers. I hope your next update is as quick as this one :)