I. LOVE. IT! And oh my gosh I freaked out about the Shadow part. My sister thinks I'm an idiot, but I was just like "But she wrote it! She read it!" I literally squealed.
Okay so now that the fanning is done. I fell better about huntress now. I'm curious to see how she'll prove it.
Oooh, maybe she'll claim to actually be Blue to save Jessica from being captured by evil villain dudes and Huntress will swoop in and save her and Shadow will freak out and go "What were you thinking!?" or maybe he'll do it as Jake and Kay will be all like "How do you know?" And Jake will try to avoid the question and that's how she'll put two-and-two together. I have a wild imagination I know. Anyways... Saw your tumblr post and am excited to see more drawings :) And as always, am excited for the next chapter.

Yay another super great chapter! I don't think Luke will believe her after how shifty she was before but *shrugs* He could be stupid. Also, yay! More Jake fluff, I still adamantly believe he is Shadow. I still want to see her glomp him and thank him for the advice, because FEELS!
I like the idea of blogs responding to reviews, it allows other readers to see it too without taking up a bunch of space in the chapter... I'm already following your tumblr and I love it when you draw out your stories, it's super cute :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! A happy chapter! I'm glad her dad really was nice and actually made time for her or I might've cried (Who am I kidding? I would have.) Next chapter (or sometime soon) I would love to see her glomp Shadow and as he is flabbergasted she gets all nervous again and explains how much his advice worked. Then again that's just me musing and I'm sure whatever you do it'll be fantastic!

Squeeeee, Shadow. We finally get to see him in action :D When is he going to reveal himself? I wanna knooowwww. Then again, suspense is fun. I still suspect Luke of being an evil mastermind. Maybe Pyro is like his uncle or something and he's selling information? I have so many theories they are all blurring together. C'mon, Shadow, use your techie skills to save the girl. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is excellent! I just started this and I must say that I am sucked in. I love the main character! I can't wait to continue reading.

Yay Jake! I still think Luke is evil... Very evil. What's wrong with baggy sweatshirts? Totally comfortable, and warm, and snuggly. Yeah I'm done now. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Another great chapter :) I still suspect Luke... Somehow Boxer Man is super interesting... Are we gonna get to see Shapes new costume soon? I love the ones you come up with, they all seem so beautiful the way you write them.

I'm am sooo wondering about Huntress. What does she have against Kaylene? And poor Shapes... Is Kay going to make her a new costume? She should. I love how Kay loses herself in her art; it seems so fitting. Shadow needs to hurry up and give Kaylene a hug or something after her run-in with Trenchcoat Guy. Honestly, she was terrified. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter :)

I thought the villain was Luke until the yellowed teeth part... Seriously though, he has theories about her and it'd make sense... Maybe he's part of a villains' league? Can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is really good : D I'm pretty sure I know who Shadow is... I've suspected Jake of being a hero since the first episode when he was so calm during a villain attack. This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories so keep it up for the next chapter :)

I actually love this so much. *claps*

Continue this is great!