Reviews for First Degree Burns
DAWN chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
I've just finished this whole series and am seriously now a fan! Please tell me there is a next part!? It can't end here! By the way, AJ Adaire is a friend of mine and I met her through her writing. She is fantastic and we talk almost daily. :)
romancejunky chapter 15 . 4/13/2015
Hey its been a long time but I thought I would drop you a line. I finally got the time to sit down and finish this latest chapter of Dane and Nichols story. I have been needing to do so for a while and I'm glad I finally did since I greatly enjoyed seeing this reunion of family even if it isn't by blood they still hold the key in my eyes to Dane getting the family that she should have always had. I look forward to seeing what their next leap forward will enable and I have a feeling that the next one will focus more on Danes mental growth with gaining back something that she thought she had lost long ago. I hope to see it soon since it has been a while since I have heard anything from you regarding their next story and I look forward to seeing it with great enthusiasm.

Guest chapter 15 . 4/24/2014
I love everyone of your books. I just hope that there is a least on more i can't wait to see what happens with Nick and Danny. I am such a fan.
Liz1992 chapter 15 . 3/21/2014
I can't believe I just finished this story. Stupid life with it's craziness!
Loved the story, absolutely love these two characters. It's crazy how Nicole's Dad's side of the family is so unwelcoming, especially since he was the first to give Danny a chance over Kathleen. Danny really took all the crap they through at her in stride. I don't blame her for hitting Lillian, she was a b*tch!
I love your writing style, it's very fluid. Hopefully we can eventually see more of Danny and Nick, maybe when they get married and have babies :D lol
Can't wait to read whatever you have that's coming out new. Thanks for giving me something to look forward to read :)
anon101 chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
What i can say, Dane & Nicole's story is addicting. Damn, I went out almost without any sleep just to finish all four stories fir Two Days. Considering that, the story got me hooked. Begging for more. Can't wait to have a sequel again and Scarred For Life is now published. just awesome. I did have a problem wit Nick trying to fix Dane's relationship with her family. Duh from the look of it, Nick could happen deduced the terrible dynamics between Dane & family. I mean she's a rich kid and they let her lived on streets. If they're as popular in the high society, media will have a field day from the scandal. its a good thing, the author had brought us Nicole's family dynamics or I Would Really Raise An Eyebrow. The 4th story is really good. Although i love Nicole, i sometimes detested her holier than thou attitude. Girl, Mean Girls are everywhere. But its great that the trouble even made them closer. Dane even got a kiss from Kathleen. Expecting more from the sequel now. i hope a child is near on the horizon.
onezero chapter 15 . 1/16/2014
You are definitely one of my favorite author. I usually prefer fanfiction to original fiction because I find it hard to invest in the characters as much, but your writing is very engaging.

I love this story and being able to see what Raymond's family is like. I am really surprised at the twist you introduced that Kathleen's family is really open and accepting compared to Raymond. If you are going to write another sequel, I hope you will be able to get into Kathleen's head a little. I am really curious if she is homophobic, don't like Dane's type or really worried for her daughter's happiness.

I am really curious about Lillian's motivation as well, even though I really don't like her. Why does she hate Nicole so much? If so, why would she bother to be so close to her and imitate her as much as possible. It is not very logical.

And after what Henry and Lynn said, I changed my mind on Christine again. She is a pitiful bitch and Dane maybe shouldn't forgive her at this junction yet. I hope someone kills Russell soon.
delcor15 chapter 15 . 1/7/2014
When Dane used to talk about the Briarmoors, they seemed much more reluctant about Dane.
Is this because she was young and looking at the world through jade colored glasses, or is it some other reason.
P.S. Why is Dane still referred to as Dane in Dane-centric narration. Dane Dane Dane. Dane. I used her name a lot in this review.
I lOVED IT chapter 15 . 1/4/2014
I loved this story so much! I was basically bawling during this last chapter - about how badly Dane was abused and then prevented from finding a happier childhood - the emotions were practically leaping off this chapters - so good! And I can't wait for more Dane and Nicole - i would really love to see them married and go through parenthood (can already imagine a chagrined Danny changing a diaper ) Anyway , great story - this series is awesome!
valok chapter 15 . 1/4/2014
Happy New Year! I must admit my eyes did get a bit tearful with this chapter. So glad you worked in the visit to the Briarmoors. The connect or disconnect with Christine is an interesting one. She really is a question mark. I'm a little sad that the guitar is going to curb but what do you do with a broken guitar? I do understand the symbolism and moving forward though. Well, the possibility of a new guitar can only mean a beginning to a new chapter in Danny's life. So I will look forward to that. :) Thank you for another wonderful story in lives of these two amazing characters.
Anon723723723 chapter 15 . 1/4/2014
Aw, sweet! Not too sure about going to see about Christine, though...
TDHLbaby2 chapter 15 . 1/4/2014
Loved it! I am happy you brought the Briarmoors back in. I was hoping she would get to reconnect with them. Thank you for another great story and I will be on the look out for new ones. You are an awesome writer. I am just gonna admit that I love all your stories but Dane and Nicole are my favorites. Oh and a little note, I flipping hate Lillian... ;)
Sapphic Sam chapter 15 . 1/4/2014
*Cries* Why can't I hold all these feels? *Cries more*
valok chapter 14 . 12/29/2013
Danny and Nichole have each other and they took the opportunity to talk things through. I'm stuck on the broken guitar in the den. What or where are you going to go with that? Hmmmm .
Anon723723723 chapter 14 . 12/28/2013
Danny really is lucky that she has Nicole, isn't she?
Anon723723723 chapter 13 . 12/22/2013
So, what I'm getting out of this chapter, and correct me if I'm wrong, is fuck Richard and his family (minus Beth), right?
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