Reviews for my diary , For You
PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 9/21/2015
I love how there's a tone and a general atmosphere of depression throughout this. The short lines-which to me seem to indicate the narrator is tired of speaking-only accentuate this and if this was intentional I applaud you. Overall, the general theme of a journal feeling empty due to the loss of a beloved was conveyed in an excellent manner.
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Again, such a crudeness you have to your writing. But it's fantastic! Great to see that there are talented writers on this site that are still alive and kicking!