|Reviews for RED|
| I-wanna-delete-this-please chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
The first thing I want to mention is that you either need to use Spellcheck or get someone who can actually spell to look over your play. Multiple words are misspelled, such as "nesicary"- should be "necessary"-, and I'm pretty sure "drying" was a typo. The other thing is your grammar. For instance, "Then I broke a lot" makes no sense. I get the impression that you don't look over your work after it's done. Doing that would solve a lot of the issues here.
The general idea of your play is pretty good, just make sure you either look it over yourself or get someone else to look at it.